Last night a fsjal saved my life...

[~Energy]

I don't know how to spell the name of the film. It's Bayol Wolf or somthing like that.

I dunno

[Seta]

Lose the stuff on right and the small boxes (including the one with scanlines). Work with the bubble style more, but don't make it too chaotic.

I like your colors so far. Lighting needs work though

[~Energy]

Ok I'll work on bubbles more and I knew the lighting was bad.

 

Thanks Holmes.

[JG.]

I so agree, those bubbles look quite awesome. Remove the text as well, and the boxes also as said.

 

And are you thinkinng of Beowulf?

[§hadow §triker]

love the colors. Bubbles look cool, but i think it wud be better at a lower opacity. Dont like the txt. About the boxes, I think it may be a bit distracting cuz it just pops out

[~Energy]

I so agree' date=' those bubbles look quite awesome. Remove the text as well, and the boxes also as said.

 

And are you thinkinng of Beowulf?

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Thanks and yes i am thinking of Beowulf, I just can't spell.

 

 

 

love the colors. Bubbles look cool' date=' but i think it wud be better at a lower opacity. Dont like the txt. About the boxes, I think it may be a bit distracting cuz it just pops out

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Thankyou