Hellraiser

[jolteon13]

 

my newest card after awhile

plz give advice

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Capitalize Fiend

LOTS of OCG errors

5/10

[Brittle Ice]

This card can only be Summoned by sending 3 DARK monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, after your Battle Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard or draw 2 cards from your Deck.

 

The image and the name could be a lot better.

Set ID is incorrect. It should be: 3 characters - EN + 3 digits. For example: DRK-EN189

The effect isn't particularly original, but it's OK.

Now, the problem with this card is certainly it's balance. Although, the Summoning condition is quite demanding, the card is still OP'd. Special Summoning 1 Level 4 monster or drawing 2 additional cards per each turn grants you a huge advantage. You could add a cost to activating those effects (perhaps Tributing 1 face-up monster you control) or change it to Summoning a Level 3 monster or drawing 1 card.

 

6 / 10

[legacy117]

D Rank

 

Reason being:

There are a lot of dominant OCG errors on the card. Use the OCG Kimimaro suggested. The picture is not the best, and it is very OP'd (overpowered). Letting you summon a Level 4 card from your Graveyard or draw 2 cards every turn is like taking candy from a baby: they won't be able to stop you from doing it over and over for the whole duel. And maybe give it a more elaborate name instead of Hellraiser.

 

Sorry if you take the criticism the wrong way.

[Brittle Ice]

One more thing!

I'd like to ask what you mean by "This card can only be Summoned"? Is it Normal Summoned or Special Summoned?

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG correction is up already

 

in terms of effects, this is still OPed, yes the cost is high, but that's only to get it out

 

the 2 card draw per turn needs a cost too

 

7/10