ok now are not a video game pic..

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lore: When this card is Summoned put a Green Counter on it. (Max 1) Once per turn, you can move a Green Counter to a face-up monster on the field. That card is treated as a WIND monster and cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)

If the monster is a WIND monster it gains 300 ATK points. A monster with a Green Counter can attack directly if your opponent controls only face-down Defense Position monsters.

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OCG fix:

 

When this card is Summoned put a Green Counter on it. (Max 1) Once per turn, you can move a Green Counter to a face-up monster on the field. That card is treated as a WIND monster and cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) A monster with a Green Counter can attack directly if your opponent controls only face-down Defense Position monsters.

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Pro: Very balanced.

Pro: Very creative.

Pro: I like the idea of the green counter. That's very interesting. :)

Pro: That name is awesome!

 

Con: The picture is good, but it could be better. You can visit the YCM showcase section for really good pictures. :)

Con: The OCG is good, but needs a little work. You don't need to add so many commas. :) Overall, here are your errors.

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wind type= WIND

green counter=Green Counter. (put Max x after counters like this)

atk points=ATK (likewise, def points=DEF.)

face up= face-up (and of course likewise for face down. :) )

 

Overall if you correct the OCG,

9/10

[WTF]

the pic is from a video game

 

small OCG errors

 

creative

 

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG errors have been pointed out already

 

the pic is a video game pic, so that makes it pop culture

 

6.8/10

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sorry, I been edited its armor

 

and i will edit the post to put a better image

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... opinions

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weee

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mega hyper bumpo