pepperlemon Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 This card is based on the game known as Super Smash Bros Brawl. If you've ever played it, this card ought to be familiar. I made the effect as close to the in-game Smash Ball as much as I could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Quite good for a first card. Your OCG was good and the effect was quite similar to the SSBB version, but the image was somewhat lacking (backgrounds tend to help). Nevertheles, you have gotten a 9/10 from me. Keep these up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pepperlemon Posted January 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Quite good for a first card. Your OCG was good and the effect was quite similar to the SSBB version' date=' but the image was somewhat lacking (backgrounds tend to help). Nevertheles, you have gotten a 9/10 from me. Keep these up![/quote'] Thank you very much. And I have to agree, the background image does leave some to be desired. I actually got it from the official Brawl website. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Good, you should make more Smash Bros. Brawl cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamtaro Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 10/10 nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pepperlemon Posted January 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Good' date=' you should make more Smash Bros. Brawl cards.[/quote'] Here are my latest three: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-180995.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 OCG needs some work. Corrected: When the equipped monster attacks a monster, destroy the attack target at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation). During your next End Phase, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pepperlemon Posted January 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 OCG needs some work. Corrected: When the equipped monster attacks a monster' date=' destroy the attack target at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation). During your next End Phase, destroy this card.[/quote'] Thanks for the constructive criticism, though my intention was for the card to be destroyed immediately after the damage step. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikikomori-san Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 IMO, it looks perfectly fine without a background. It's an equip card, so I don't really expect it to have a background. But that's just me. I'm too lazy to put backgrounds in my cards. >>; 7/10. OCG has errors. Refer to BlackSkullCortez's first part of his suggestion.Fine pic, decent effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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