ChaosIncarn Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 I'm having trouble deciding if this card is really OP or not. It has draw backs like Life Point drain, and is even Type restricted. What do you guys think? [spoiler=Card Lore]This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. When this card comes into play, pay Life Points equal to the equipped card's Level x 100. The equipped card gains ATK points equal to the amount of Life Points you payed. When the equipped card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, pay Life Points and increase it's ATK by 100 x the destroyed card's Level. These increases last so long as this card remains face up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalxMartyr Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Some OCG corrections, although I'm nowhere near an expert... So it may be closer to perfect but not spot-on. This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. When this card is activated, pay Life Points equal to the equipped card's Level x 100. The equipped card gains ATK equal to the amount of Life Points you paid. When the equipped card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, pay Life Points equal to the destroyed card's Level x 100 (this is not optional). Increase the equipped monster's ATK by the amount of Life Points you paid. The ATK increases last as long as this card remains face-up on the field. I honestly don't think it's overpowered because of the serious life point toll it takes. It can simply suck you dry if the monster continues to battle. If it does turn out to be overpowered, maybe you can throw on something that destroys the equipped monster if the card is removed from the field... If you're serious about the whole "cursed" part of the blade, maybe you can have it negate the monster's effect if it's an effect monster, or even make a 1/6 chance with a die roll that it could damage you equal to its attack each time it tries to attack... I don't know, I love the idea of the card. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted January 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Wow, thanks a lot. I'll definitely take those tips into consideration and probably have a revision of this card soon. Thanks again for the input ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 very good OCG, which is great since you're new what few errors have been pointed out already personally though, I wouldn't make the equipped monster's atk gain a permanent one 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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