RYANSWORLD64 Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 I know the text is wrong on some of the cards im lazyplz rate and tell me what i should do to balence my Savior of the Earth setps srry for using pics i saw other ppl have i just found them on photo bucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 a few ocg errors, but it's not bad for a begginner. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYANSWORLD64 Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 thank you can you tell me my errors so i may fix them i also made a ultimate fusion of ender and nim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plazmavore Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 i agree with that guy,OCG, pics are okwhen you wright somfin like 'special summon' put capital letters at the start of each word.e.g:When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned...'get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYANSWORLD64 Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 yeah i don't really like the ocg but hows balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 I'm in the process of doing so, just wait, plse. thanks, oh and the balance is kinda bad for some cards, I'll tell each of them individually when i'm done, of course from my perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYANSWORLD64 Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 oh thxyeh i kinda can tell i ges my rituals and the vassalyeh i kinda can tell i ges my rituals and the vassal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 oh thxyeh i kinda can tell i ges my rituals and the vassalyeh i kinda can tell i ges my rituals and the vassal You realize you posted the same thing twice?Yea, really, not bad for a beginner, by the way, one of your cards has nothing on it, on the pic and card, no effect. Total Set Rating= 7/10 Just keep trying. Ocg Fixes Earth's shaman: (9/10-Good)Tribute this card to search for any ritual monster card and add it to your hand. ---------------Earth's Water Queen: (9/10-Good)When this card is successfully summoned, you can special summon one "The Queens Vassal" from your deck.---------------Ender Earth's Prince of Flames: (6/10 Decrease the attack & Defense somewhat-Maybe 3000 for both)This card cannot normal summoned or set. This card cannot be ritual summoned, except by the effect of "The Burning Soul". When this card is successfully summoned, you can add one Enders Blade from your deck to your hand. (Note that the monster tribute effect goes on the ritual spell card, because it is called a cost. The ritual spell card explains how to summon the ritual card) Ender's Blade: (4/10-I suggest making it so its life points effect makes you lose 3000, only.)Equip this card to one face-up Enders Earth's Prince of Flames on the field. While equipped, the monster can attack directly. When the equipped monster is detroyed and sent to the graveyard, this card is destroyed and you lose halve your lifepoints. Nim Protector of the Earth: (8/10-This is the decent one, I believe.)Any monster with "Earth" in its name cannot be selected as an attack target, except for this card. This card can attack twice during your battle phase if you remove from play the top 10 cards from your deck and all the cards in your graveyard. The Burning Soul: (2/10-Replace it with this, then it will be an 8/10, if you want to)This card is used to ritual summon "Enders Earth's Prince of Flames". You can only tribute monsters that are level 10 or higher from your hand. The Queens Vassal: (8/10 -My suggestion is to reduce the damge inflicted)If "Earth's Water Queen" on your side of the field would be destroyed, destroy this card and inflict 1400 damgae to both players' life points. Hope this helped, take note that mine isn't the best either, but it helps others understand your idea's clearly. The numbers besides the name is the balance I give to them and some suggestions. Also, you don't have to use any of these if you don't want to, they are here just for your convenience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 it's Spellcaster, not Spell-caster for the type and XzY already pointed out all the OCG errors, though it didn't include the capitalization errors like normal summoned or set should be Normal Summoned or Set, life points should be Life Points, graveyard should be Graveyard, ritual summoned should be Ritual Summoned, etc 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYANSWORLD64 Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Thanks for your guys help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Thanks for your guys help yep, anytime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtistX Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Pretty Cool 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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