KindredTether Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 There, I will make the river puren later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomoige Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 You need to have more description,think of a better name,theyre not too bad though my rating 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 effects are bland, lets pump it up a bit. K? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RevolutionHynes Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Gimme a break these were my first cards, but if you wanna see better cards i'll give em to you by 2:30 today but promise you'll rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackWindDragon Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 you cant do aqua and winged beast type on one card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for a type also you shouldn't put Aqua AND Winged Beast in the types for the vanilla 2nd one doesn't even follow the rules of a spirit monster 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 it's Winged Beast' date=' not Winged-Beast for a type also you shouldn't put Aqua AND Winged Beast in the types for the vanilla 2nd one doesn't even follow the rules of a spirit monster 3/10[/quote'] I completely agree with the above post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Huh,What do I care I only made these cards this morning I,ve got much better cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShroomShroom Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Hmmmmm . . . . . . . 6/10 for effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 These are good you just need to give a little more info on purple butterflies of the water.7/10=cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COLS Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 if you have better cards why don't you post them?and we're not putting you down (at least i'm not), we're trying to give you constructive criticism. take a look around the forums (click on the links in my sig? plz?) and find out what makes good cards. Also, vanillas have flavor text, not just the name of the card.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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