wakely Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 now i have 4 cards,plez don't say harmful commits (Pokemon/tuner) if this card is sent to the graveyard by an effect, add "master ball" from your deck to your hand.if any "Pokemon" type card is sent to your hand, the owner gets 500 life points. [/img] (Pokemon/effect) when this card is normal summoned,you can add a "pikachu" from your deck to your hand. a new one: (continuous spell) add a monster card from your graveyard to your hand, then send a card from your hand to the graveyard. and a good one: [/img] (Pokemon/effect) when this card is tribute summoned successfully, every card on the field is sent to the graveyard except this card. the owner of this card gets 500 life points for each monster card in their opponents graveyard, and the owner of this card gets 500 battle damage for each monster in their own graveyard. i hope u commit with good stuffand they are still more to come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikikomori-san Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Well, the effects itself are fine. It's just the OCG, that is, the grammar. Pics need some work, but that's about it. -No rating because you don't want "harmful comments"- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rtrdg Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Deoxys' effect sounds a bit odd at the end. Do you mean: "You gain 500 Life Points for every card in your opponent's Graveyard, and you lose 500 Life Points for each card in your Graveyard"? Apart from that, it's a good start. Needs some grammar fixing, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Well' date=' the effects itself are fine. It's just the OCG, that is, the grammar. Pics need some work, but that's about it. -No rating because you don't want "harmful comments"-[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 firstly, uppercase the names of ur cards and any types if theyr monsters and the beginning of sentences, heres the right lore for each:Pikachu-If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, add 1 "Master Ball" from your Deck to your hand. If any Pokemon-Type monster is sent to your hand, you gain 500 Life Points. Pichu-When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Pikachu" from your Deck to your hand.Master Ball-Discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard to your hand.Deoxys-When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, destroy all cards on the field (excluding this card). You gain 500 Life Points for each Monster Card in your opponent's Graveyard and lose 500 Life Points for each Monster Card in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darman05 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Wow lol lol lol lol lol lol just can't stop yelling lol lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wakely Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 hi,i am makeing a new thread that will show u the things am makeing,have a look,thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pudpop Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I Like Deoxyz effect.It's perfect for a D.D deck since most of your cards are removed from play.Not bad cards for a new member, they're actually pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yomamasmama Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 deoxys's effect would be good in a dd deck, thats actually a really good idea... umm u spelled deoxys wrong... y the heck is master ball continuous and not normal? i guess that would be an ok cost because it would get in ur way so much and piss u off... that would be funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wakely Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 i have made a deck list so go on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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