Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 [align=center]Let's make a ridiculous one instead. [spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy- or Fiend-Type monsters you control. When a card is removed from play, place 1 Alignment Counter on this card (Max. 5). Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters on this card to destroy all cards on your side the field except this one. Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way. I don't like how this card came out. I was bored and wanted to get back up on card making...but I dunno. Guys, am I getting worse? /: I might make a Archetype out of this too. Since I liked the idea at first. Image Credit = dA, Photobucket, Pixiv. Whatever it's from. I just got it from Jazin Kay's Pixiv Album. /: Rate/Hate/Comment/Tell me I suck. D: Whatever.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 OCG fix will be provided below. It's very minor though. Otherwise, very nice card actually, only thig I don't like is the name =/ This monster cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy- or Fiend-Type monsters you control. When a card is removed from play, place 1 Alignment Counter on this card (Max. 5). Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters on this card to destroy all cards on your side the field except this one. Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 This is awesome just fix the OCG10/10 BLOWN ME AWAY!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Huh, pretty interesting card. It'd work out pretty good in a DARK Counterparts Deck.Effect is interesting, and like I said in a DARK Counterparts Deck you could summon it pretty easily cause alot of DARK support monsters are fiend-type, and DARK Counterparts have the whole remove-from-play-to-summon thing which would make it's effect fairly easy to use.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Did you mean Shinigami (Death God, Japanese)? Balanced. You (or your opponent) must remove from play exactly 5 cards to trigger the last effect right? Great for a Deck that focus on remove from play. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 OCG fix will be provided below. It's very minor though. Otherwise' date=' very nice card actually, only thig I don't like is the name =/ This monster cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy[b']-[/b] or Fiend-Type monsters you control. When a card is removed from play, place 1 Alignment Counter on this card (Max. 5). Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters on this card to destroy all cards on your side the field except this one. Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way. Fixed. Thanks for that. And thanks for the comment. It means alot coming from one of the epic card makers on here.I couldn't come up with a better name. Sorry. xD This is awesome just fix the OCG10/10 BLOWN ME AWAY!!!! Thanks. Huh' date=' pretty interesting card. It'd work out pretty good in a DARK Counterparts Deck.Effect is interesting, and like I said in a DARK Counterparts Deck you could summon it pretty easily cause alot of DARK support monsters are fiend-type, and DARK Counterparts have the whole remove-from-play-to-summon thing which would make it's effect fairly easy to use.9/10.[/quote'] Meaning that this card makes DARK Counterparts lulzy.Thanks. Did you mean Shinigami (Death God' date=' Japanese)? Balanced. You (or your opponent) must remove from play exactly 5 cards to trigger the last effect right? Great for a Deck that focus on remove from play. 7/10.[/quote'] Not exactly 5. Just have to remove 5 cards from play. If you remove more when this card has it's 5 counters, it's done until you nuke your side. And yeah, I meant Shinigami. xD Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 I like it.9/10I don't know why but I dislike the pic.Also, there is no need to credit Jazin since he gets most of his pics off deviantART and just adds them to his gallery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Speaking of images, do you want a link to my archive? Not custom, but carefully selected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 I like it.9/10I don't know why but I dislike the pic.Also' date=' there is no need to credit Jazin since he gets most of his pics off deviantART and just adds them to his gallery.[/quote'] Most of those aren't from dA. They're from Pixiv if I recall. Speaking of images' date=' do you want a link to my archive? Not custom, but carefully selected.[/quote'] Sure. You can PM them to me. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 But i thought Jazin doesn't just copied it from deviant. He clean the pictures and sometimes render it. I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 But i thought Jazin doesn't just copied it from deviant. He clean the pictures and sometimes render it. I think. He crops them from the places he gets them from. He might have gotten some from dA, but I use the ones he got from Pixiv. I don't know if he cleans and renders it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 I have checked, most of his "pixiv" images are actually from deviantART. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 I have checked' date=' most of his "pixiv" images are actually from deviantART.[/quote'] Grah. Screw it. I fixed it. Too confused. /:< So er um, do you guys think I'm getting better at this? I just want your opinions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Well as a fan of your cards I can say just by looking at the ratings for this that your improving. Greatly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Remember me?10/10. Mad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Well as a fan of your cards I can say just by looking at the ratings for this that your improving. Greatly. Fan of my cards? D'awww. You make me feel special. <3Thanks. I'm glad I'm not getting bad at this. Remember me?10/10. Mad. Lol. Don't be mad at me. D:Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 "Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters on this card to destroy all cards on your side the field except this one. Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way." should be "Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters from this card to destroy all other cards on your side of the field and inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent per card destroyed via this effect." it has a good burn effect, so I'll rate it 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 "Once per turn' date=' you can remove 5 Alignment Counters on this card to destroy all cards on your side the field except this one. Inflict 400 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way." should be "Once per turn, you can remove 5 Alignment Counters from this card to destroy all other cards on your side of the field and inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent per card destroyed via this effect." it has a good burn effect, so I'll rate it 8.9/10[/quote'] I don't think I've seen a "via this effect" on a card before. Are you sure it's right? o: Any suggestions to raise that rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Via this effect is wrong. Take my advice: Don't listen to rag 90% of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 But i thought Jazin doesn't just copied it from deviant. He clean the pictures and sometimes render it. I think. He crops them from the places he gets them from. He might have gotten some from dA' date=' but I use the ones he got from Pixiv. I don't know if he cleans and renders it.[/quote']I do, on most. Some don't need anything other than cropping. Not all of my art came from DA and not all of it came from Pixiv. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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