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I'm going to be serious:

Your OCG is god awful. Atleast look at some other cards to get your OCG together.

 

Now. As for the cards: Hell Keeper is Red-Eyes basically. Sky Reaper isn't worth anything since it has no support. EVIL REAPER(LOLCAPS) DOES NOT need it's name capitalized. Take out "This REAPER takes no mercy", it isn't an effect. Plus it should be "This reaper shows no mercy.". Scythe is...err...I dunno how to say it.

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' increase this monster's ATK by 200 during each of your Standby Phases. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this monster's ATK by 400.[/quote']
Equip this card to a Reaper-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 600 ATK and DEF.

 

Oh, and Reaper isn't a type. D:

You'll get better, just fix these up.

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I'm going to be serious:

Your OCG is god awful. Atleast look at some other cards to get your OCG together.

 

Now. As for the cards: Hell Keeper is Red-Eyes basically. Sky Reaper isn't worth anything since it has no support. EVIL REAPER(LOLCAPS) DOES NOT need it's name capitalized. Take out "This REAPER takes no mercy"' date=' it isn't an effect. Plus it should be "This reaper shows no mercy.". Scythe is...err...I dunno how to say it.

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase this monster's ATK by 200 during each of your Standby Phases. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this monster's ATK by 400.
Equip this card to a Reaper-Type monster. The equipped monster gains 600 ATK and DEF.

 

Oh' date=' and Reaper isn't a type. D:

You'll get better, just fix these up.

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lol notfing like tell it as it is :lol::lol:

 

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any better?

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