Willieh Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 ITT: RELATIVITY = TIME MACHINE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Really casual. Your teacher must be awesome...or maybe it's because you live in Denmark. Anyways, simple and straight-forward. Mmk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Actually, my teacher is the largest dick (but she's a woman) in the school. So it's probably because I live in Denmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 If time travel is possible, we would feel its effects. Constantly. We can't... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 If time travel is possible' date=' we would feel its effects. Constantly. We can't...[/quote'] You felt like writing that. Writing has a certain speed. Speed is d/t. Time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Time travel into the future is possible. We're doing it right now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Time travel into the future is possible. We're doing it right now! Ahahahaha. Very funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Time travel into the future is possible. We're doing it right now! Ahahahaha. Very funny. Stop being sarcastic about something everybody would feel like being sarcastic about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Yes, but can I go back to when I was typing my previous message and stop myself?No, because if I could, and did, that post wouldn't exist, thus, your response wouldn't, and this response wouldn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 If time travel is possible' date=' we would feel its effects. Constantly. We can't...[/quote'] You felt like writing that. Writing has a certain speed. Speed is d/t. Time! Time is a measurement of distance, not speed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 YOUR SPELLING OF THE WORD WEIRDIS ELEPHUNTING INCORRECT essay was interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 You probably don't want a grammar nazi ripping your paper, so I'd like to nitpick about only one thing. if time travel actually existed, which it doesn’t yet The word 'if' implies that time travel does not exist. For example, if I go to the mall, I will buy a shirt. The 'if' implies that I have not gone to the mall yet, otherwise I would have bought a shirt. It's not a big issue, but redundancy can become a problem once you get stricter teachers. I've heard from older students that college English is a bitch, so just make a conscience effort to avoid that. Furthermore, the reader should know that time travel doesn't exist. One thing I didn't like about your essay was how informal it sounded. While being too formal becomes a problem, it sounded like you were casually talking. While this may be what your teacher expected, an 'essay' doesn't really fall under the format of casual. Mostly: This topic is very, very confusing. It’s hard to explain. But I tried my best. If you could formalize (word?) that a bit more, it'd increase the overall life if your essay. Oh, and work on conclusions. Now that I'm done with that, time travel doesn't seem too viable at the moment. From the looks of it, we are going to get teleportation before we get time travel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 You probably don't want a grammar nazi ripping your paper' date=' so I'd like to nitpick about only one thing. [i']if time travel actually existed, which it doesn’t yet[/i] The word 'if' implies that time travel does not exist. For example, if I go to the mall, I will buy a shirt. The 'if' implies that I have not gone to the mall yet, otherwise I would have bought a shirt. It's not a big issue, but redundancy can become a problem once you get stricter teachers. I've heard from older students that college English is a bitch, so just make a conscience effort to avoid that. Furthermore, the reader should know that time travel doesn't exist. One thing I didn't like about your essay was how informal it sounded. While being too formal becomes a problem, it sounded like you were casually talking. While this may be what your teacher expected, an 'essay' doesn't really fall under the format of casual. Mostly: This topic is very, very confusing. It’s hard to explain. But I tried my best. If you could formalize (word?) that a bit more, it'd increase the overall life if your essay. Oh, and work on conclusions. Now that I'm done with that, time travel doesn't seem too viable at the moment. From the looks of it, we are going to get teleportation before we get time travel. It was due 2 days ago, so a bit too late. But I am better than my english teacher at english, so she won't notice ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 You probably don't want a grammar nazi ripping your paper' date=' so I'd like to nitpick about only one thing. [i']if time travel actually existed, which it doesn’t yet[/i] The word 'if' implies that time travel does not exist. For example, if I go to the mall, I will buy a shirt. The 'if' implies that I have not gone to the mall yet, otherwise I would have bought a shirt. It's not a big issue, but redundancy can become a problem once you get stricter teachers. I've heard from older students that college English is a bitch, so just make a conscience effort to avoid that. Furthermore, the reader should know that time travel doesn't exist. One thing I didn't like about your essay was how informal it sounded. While being too formal becomes a problem, it sounded like you were casually talking. While this may be what your teacher expected, an 'essay' doesn't really fall under the format of casual. Mostly: This topic is very, very confusing. It’s hard to explain. But I tried my best. If you could formalize (word?) that a bit more, it'd increase the overall life if your essay. Oh, and work on conclusions. Now that I'm done with that, time travel doesn't seem too viable at the moment. From the looks of it, we are going to get teleportation before we get time travel. It was due 2 days ago, so a bit too late. But I am better than my english teacher at english, so she won't notice ;D @Dark: It simply WASN'T an essay. Have you ever heard of people that don't use a dictionary? Well, you got one. And again, just by looking at the "essay", you would expect the writer not to know what do "formal" or "informal" mean.@JG: That's just wrong on basically any level. But you're a lucky bast*rd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 You take the credit of making Windows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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