Necro Pheonix Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 When death conquers life, this world and the next shall bathe in darkness. Be the envoy of that demise. Dark Synchro Summon! Doom Emissay, Ka'rijan Necroviathan! Lore: 1 "Necro" non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark TunerThis card cannot be Special Summoned, except by a Dark Synchro Summon. When this card is Summoned, remove from play 3 "Necro" monsters you control. If you do not, this card is destroyed. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all removed from play "Necro" monsters x 100. While you control another face-up "Necro" monster, this card cannot be targeted by the effects of Monster Cards or Spell Cards. If this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle, you can halve this cards ATK to have it attack once again. If you not control another face-up "Necro" monster, pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases (this is not optional). Credit to Max Darkness for OCG and Pic help and Master Sami for the dark synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 nice card, although it could be better. for one thing, the ocg is off. for another, this card would really only be helpful in a D.D. deck, so that kind of limites its usage capability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 dang this is amazing 10/10 i dont see any errors lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 well i do. they are small, but they are there. i don't feel like going through and pointing them out right now though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 for one thing' date=' the ocg is off.[/quote'] How so? The reason I left off the second Dark Synchro sentance is because everyone knows how to Dark Synchro Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 that's not what i am talking about. i am talking about the effect itself. there are either letters missing ot just not capitalized. look and i am sure that you will find them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 The reason that this seems it only goes well withD.D. cards is because it wa geare around my Necron cards, which is like D.D. Thanks for the rates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Dark Synchro Summon. When this card is succesfully Summoned, remove 3 monsters with "Necro" on your side of the field from play. If you do not, this card is destroyed. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all removed from play "Necro" monsters x100. While there is another face up card with "Necro" in it's name, this card is cannot be targeted by Spell cards or Effect Monsters. If this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle, it can attack once again by halving its ATK. If you not control another monster with "Necro" in its name, pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases or destroy this card. Fixed.Overall it's ok. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 [spoiler=]This card cannot be Special Summoned' date=' except by Dark Synchro Summon. When this card is succesfully Summoned, remove 3 monsters [b']with "Necro" on your side of the field from play[/b]. If you do not, this card is destroyed. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all removed from play "Necro" monsters x100. While there is another face up card with "Necro" in it's name, this card is cannot be targeted by Spell cards or Effect Monsters. If this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle, it can attack once again by halving its ATK. If you not control another monster with "Necro" in its name, pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases or destroy this card. Fixed. Not really 1. It's no longer 'with "x" in their name'; it's '"x" monsters'2. It's no longer 'on your side of the field'; it's 'you control'3. There's a space between x and 100.4. 'cards' should be capitalised. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 [spoiler=]This card cannot be Special Summoned' date=' except by Dark Synchro Summon. When this card is succesfully Summoned, remove 3 monsters [b']with "Necro" on your side of the field from play[/b]. If you do not, this card is destroyed. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all removed from play "Necro" monsters x100. While there is another face up card with "Necro" in it's name, this card is cannot be targeted by Spell cards or Effect Monsters. If this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle, it can attack once again by halving its ATK. If you not control another monster with "Necro" in its name, pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases or destroy this card. Fixed. Not really 1. It's no longer 'with "x" in their name'; it's '"x" monsters'2. It's no longer 'on your side of the field'; it's 'you control'3. There's a space between x and 100.4. 'cards' should be capitalised.I shall fix. 1 "Necro" non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark TunerThis card cannot be Special Summoned, except by a Dark Synchro Summon. When this card is Summoned, remove from play 3 "Necro" monsters you control. If you do not, this card is destroyed. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn this card is Special Summoned. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the combined Levels of all removed from play "Necro" monsters x 100. While you control another face-up "Necro" monster, this card cannot be targeted by the effects of Monster Cards or Spell Cards. If this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle, you can halve this cards ATK to have it attack once again. If you not control another face-up "Necro" monster, pay 1000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases (this is not optional). I'm not exactly sure with some of the fixes I made. It's quite good. Sadly, for me, that card doesn't show up. I'll give this a 8.2/10 instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 So, when Summoned, this card would only have 300 ATK assuming there are no "Necro" monsters removed from the game? Did you mean 1000? It seems UP'd to me. :/ Otherwise, great card. Love the pic and name. Are you working on the rest of this "Necron" set now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 So' date=' when Summoned, this card would only have 300 ATK assuming there are no "Necro" monsters removed from the game? Did you mean 1000? It seems UP'd to me. :/ Otherwise, great card. Love the pic and name. Are you working on the rest of this "Necron" set now?[/quote'] Combined Levels x 100. So probably around 1500 when it's first summoned, increasing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 So probably around 1500 when it's first summoned' date=' increasing.[/quote'] Oh. That's makes more sense. Would work nice in a "D.D. Deck" IMO. Again, nice card Sweeny! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Thanks every one.@Sweet- I have already made it, it was a joint set me and Max did a while back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 I did catch a few tiny errors, but nothing big enough to hurt your score. That Pic is epin' sweet though 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Thank you :):):) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 at lv -10, the combined levels will have to be at least 30 to make it work out well for halving the card's ATK to get it to attack again's effect, don't make that a perm effect, just make it last 1 turn 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Thanks Ragnarok! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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