Rakun62 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Here they are, comment and rate pls.. As long as this card remains on the field, card effects are negated and positions of cards on the field cannot switch. Pay 900 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you cannot this card is destroyed. Destroy monster cards which have less ATK points than "Legendary Spirit of Ice Dragon" on the field the turn that this card is summoned. (Excluding Special Summon) Pay 900 Life Points to Normal Summon or Set this monster. Destroy monster which has highest ATK points on the field (at most 5 stars). As long as this card remains on the field face-up ATK/DEF position, remove monster cards which are destroyed. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up, flip 1 face-up monster on the field into face-down Defense Position. (Flipped card's effect is negated.) Discard 3 cards to activate this card. Switch all cards' positions on the field.-) If there are two or more cards on your opponent's side which are switched to ATK position, draw 2 cards.-) If there are two or more more cards on your opponent's side which are switched to DEF position, discard one card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Battle Mage" as an Equip Spell Card, OR change back to a monster in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, each time that monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on the field. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the monster that this card is equipped to is destroyed in battle, this card is destroyed instead.) As long as this remains on the field face-up DEF position, increase Spellcaster-Type monsters' ATK by 200 on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon a Machine-Type monster face-up ATK position. (At most 5 stars) I hope you like them.. [updated] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 The third card should only have 1 Type, and the OCG could use some work. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakun62 Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 thnx for comment and rate.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 2nd card pic is overused 3rd card's type isn't real. Make it machine OR warrior, not both some capitalization errors, like life points should be Life Points 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Pretty good for a new member. Minor OCG errors, and Cap. errors, other wise they seem fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxupsizerxX Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Us new mems need to stick together lol. I like em. The third one is a bit touchy, but hey... Nice work. The cards I've made are pretty pointless. They all look like crap. Except maybe my Ganondorf card. Anyway, good work. You're far better than I am. Also Nice Day could be changed to "Fair day" or something. I dunno why but NIce Day doesn't work for me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Lol, the 1st card's pic, would look EPIC FUNNY as a Joke Card. Anyway, very nice cards for a New Member. ;) 2nd card's pic is Overused, there are some caps errors and don't use 2 types on the same card. But OCG is good, out of some minor errors. Pics are really nice, specially 4th card's one. 8/10 Keep up the good work. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakun62 Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Alright, Firstly thanks for comments and rates Ok, 2nd card's pic was overused so I have changed its pic. (According to its new pic, its name was also changed.) Capitalization errors [Fixed] Third card's type [Fixed] And There are new cards that I have just added.. (Comment / Rate / Etc. - as usual) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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