MysticWater Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 [align=center]Here are some cards that I just made. I do plan on making more, but for now, there are gonna have to do. Constructive Criticism, Please. "The Loyal Troop" + "Pegasus - The Steed"When this card attacks, no Trap Cards can be activated. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "The Loyal Troop" and 1 "Pegasus - The Steed" cards from your Graveyard. They are destroyed at the End Phase of your next turn. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Warrior-Type monster on your field. Once per turn, you tribute 1 Warrior-Type monster on your field to have this card gain ATk equal to the Level of the tributed monster x100. Any card that battles this card is destroyed at the end of the Battle Phase. Control of this monster cannot switch. During each of your End Phases, if this card has destroyed an opponent's monster by battle and sent it to the Graveyard this turn, increase your Life Points by 600. When this card is tributed for a Tribute Summon, you gain 1000 Life Points. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand at the end of the turn that this card was Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, destroy all non-Warrior-Type monsters on the field. You receive damage equal to the number of monsters destroyed by this effect x300 [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 The effects of these cards are too simple. Maybe add something more to them? Especially "The Loyal Troop". 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxupsizerxX Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I like em. They're good, but I agree with Lyfe. The effects could be better. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Thanks for the ratings, you guys. I'll start thinking of new effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menace13 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Not to mention this is in the wrong section. It shouldn't be in the FINISHED set section. But 8/10 anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 If you look around, there are many threads in this sub-section that are unfinished. It's a work-in-progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 good well...in the sets is not necesary to have 40 cards made by you. By creating any number of monsters and support cards is enough. i guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gredious AKA. Solomon409 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 The effects of these cards are too simple. Maybe add something more to them? Especially "The Loyal Troop". 8/10 the loyal troop seems more like a grunt kind of card, maybe its supposed to have a simple effect...... i love these so far, Plz add some spell and trap cards, here's an idea for a spell: Archer" Assault, or Flanking the Enemy: Calvary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Good Cards. Keep going. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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