2 Field Spells

[Neil Moffatt]

Please help me people. I need comments.

[MysticWater]

The first one would make the cards a bit OP'd; I'd need to see the rest of your cards.

When you halve it, is it a permanent effect? Until then, I will assume so.

 

Radient Keep is extremely OP'd considering that if you had a field full of "Holy Beacon" monsters, they would get an extra 200 ATK each turn.

 

6/10

[kizzfan911]

A few OCG errors(im not good at fixing them though), You spelled Radiant wrong. Pics are good though. 7/10 in all.

[ragnarok1945]

Radiant Keep's atk boost is fine since it'll gain a max of 1000 atk anyway, not that huge

 

the same is true for the LP gain, very small in comparison

 

on effects, I'll give the two cards 7.9/10

[Neil Moffatt]

OK guys, thanks, I'll clarify a few things:

1. The ATK reduce IS NOT permanent. I put on the card that the ATK cut last until the end of the opponent's turn.

2. I probably should have put on my Radiance Counter limit, which I intend to be 5.

3. My Holy Beacon monsters don't have a lot of ATK, it's the Shadow Force monsters that are more brutal, except maybe Spirit Of Justice.

 

I'm almost finished my set, so then you can be as brutal as you want. I know I'm not a good cardmaker, but I'm still gonna post. so thanks for your critisism.

[WTF]

pretty good

 

7/10

 

maybe some work to do