the soul splitter updated and now ocg

[jamora]

and

[ragnarok1945]

first card doesn't even follow the real spirit type monster rules

 

there's OCG and capitalization on both cards (life points should be Life Points, fiend-type should be Fiend-Type, dragon-type should be Dragon-Type)

 

4/10

[jamora]

are they better tho

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and with a new one

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sorry about that

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there is something wrong with this my other card keep showing a my new one?

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ok i fixed it here u go

[DMZ]

Articulo

"At the same time" can be left out, it's clear what you mean.

The last sentence I would change to "This card cannot be affected by the effects of Fiend and Dragon-type monsters"

7/10

 

Baku

"For every attack your opponent declares he/she loses 100 Life Points"

6/10

 

Raziel

"While this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all LIGHT monsters by 700. During each Standby Phase you can remove 1 card in your opponent's hand from play"

7/10

 

Hope this helps

[jamora]

yep it did thank you here is another

[DMZ]

What does the effect mean?

"The owner of the card attacking this card gains Life Points equal to the monster's level x200. The monster is destroyed after Damage Calculation"

 

Or

 

"You gain Life Points equal to the level of the attacking monster x200. The attacking monster is then destroyed(before or after Damage Calculation??)"

[Aero~]

horrible OCG.

6/10

[Epic Inciser]

Nice names and pics, I'll give you that.

 

But the OCG is very lacking, and I'm pretty sure that Baku's Type is supposed to be "Spirit", and like ragnarok said, yeah, it's effect doesn't even follow the Spirit Monster rules. Also, you spelled "lose" wrong.

 

In the second card, capitalize Fiend and Dragon.

 

Effects are too plain. I'm sorry man, but you get a 3/10 from me.

[jamora]

aw ok lol i thought that where caped and why are the effects lame?

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oh abd what sould baku do if it is a sprit im not sher what u r saying?

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This is a soul splitter and it goes along with my xenomorph set

[WTF]

i dont think these are to great.

 

maybe you should fix them k?

 

5/10

[jamora]

whats to fix????

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whats to fix???

[Menace13]

I like "and now OCG" lie in the thread title.

[ChaosMuramasa]

 

2 Tributes required with a fair ATK and a nice effect. I like it.

 

Correct OCG: This monster cannot be selected as an attack target if there is another "Xenomorph" monster on the field. When this card is successfully Summoned' date=' discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand.

 

 

For two tributes, it's fine. However, the second effect is rather strong. Removing a card EACH standby phase sounds rather broken. Perhaps you could limit it to your standby phase? To further even it out, maybe a restriction on the summoning conditions could? Like so:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this card is face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters gain 700 ATK. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent must discard 1 random card.

[jamora]

thank u ill fix them in a bit

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and what do u think about this magic card

[ChaosMuramasa]

It has an interesting effect. Seems like a fine expansion to the classic Mask of Restrict.

 

Correct OCG (I think, I've never seen something like this in the real game):

When this card is activated, all monsters on the field except the one(s) with the lowest ATK are changed to face-down Defense Position. Neither player can Tribute monsters.

[jamora]

what do u rate it as?

[ChaosMuramasa]

what do u rate it as?

 

Probably 8 or 9 outta 10. Creates a lock-down kind of moment which isn't exactly seen too much now a days.

[jamora]

everything i make i try to make diffrent but the ocg limints are hard to get right and they get lame or up or op :( but yea thank u for all the help add to buddylist if u want

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another new one i plan to finish this set before the end of the month.