my first card

[ryan990]

 

hope you like

[ragnarok1945]

since it's your first card, the OCG errors are to be expected

 

there's no "god" card unless you intend to create them yourself

 

sacrifice should be Tribute

 

life points should be Life Points

 

you misspelled "card" in the first sentence as well

 

4/10

[ryan990]

thanks i didnt know that thanks for pointing it out

[jamora]

1/10 fix everything

[PenguinZ]

congrats on the first card. anyway good job for a new member.

 

4/10

[XxupsizerxX]

Where are the full stops..? The text doesn't sound like a Yugioh card. I suggest grabbing a yugioh card with sorta the same effect, and kinda type it in the same sort of text. I know its your first card so... ... ... gods, ummm... ... ... ... ... 4.5/10

[KindredTether]

Ok for a new member 4/10 I agree with ragnarok1945 and I know how you feel Ionly became a 2-star member yesterday afternoon.

[§hadow §triker]

OCG errors

not a fan of the pic but its ok

you need to make your own god cards cuz there are none, unless your are referring to the Egyptian god cards...

Card is OP imo

but not bad for a first i guess