say hello to the Mindsworn monsters 3/20

[Sp1at]

This deck is to get the opponent confinit then blast everything at them. Some Mindsworns have ATK and some don't.

 

[spoiler=Monsters]

[spoiler=EN001]

[spoiler=Effect]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Psychic-type monsters on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a monster with 2000 or more ATK. Halve all Battle Damage you take from battles involving this monster. When this card battles a Level 8 or lower monster, destroy the monster before the Damage Step. After the Damage Step, send the top 5 cards of your opponent's deck to the Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=EN002]

[spoiler=Effect]

When this card inflicts battle damage, discard 3 card's from the top of your opponents deck to the Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=EN003]

[spoiler=Effect]

As long as this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent can't destroy any "Mindsworn" by Battle. Oce per turn, Discard the top 2 cards from your opponent's deck.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=plot]

deck destrction

 

 

[spoiler=Update history]

1.Updated EN001

2.EN002 added

3.EN003 added

 

 

[Menace13]

confinit? You mean confident? But anyways, tons of OCG errors. Not to mention the effect hardly makes sense. Read other peoples' cards before making your own.

 

5.6/10

[Sp1at]

where are the errors?

[Menace13]

You have:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 Psychic-Type monsters on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle unless a monster that has 2000 attack or more. (Damage is appied by half the damage) When this card enters battle with a Level 8 or lower the monster is destroyed, after the damage step discard 5 cards from the top of your opponents deck.

 

It should be (as best I know):

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Psychic-type monsters on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a monster with 2000 or more ATK. Halve all Battle Damage you take from battles involving this monster. When this card battles a Level 8 or lower monster, destroy the monster before the Damage Step. After the Damage Step, send the top 5 cards of your opponent's deck to the Graveyard.

[Sp1at]

card fixed!

[Menace13]

lol I said that was the best I knew, ask ragnarok for the BEST ocg.

[Sp1at]

well it is better then it was before

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EN002 ADDED!

[Dougidog]

LOL nice cards!! Very interesting concepts for special abilities as well.

Nice work!

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[ragnarok1945]

2nd one's effect a little short, maybe add an effect to that one

 

set should be Set

 

that's about it for OCG

 

and I love the milling effect on card1

 

9/10

[Menace13]

Why'd you put the old pic back for #1? And BTW: #2's ATK is too high. 2300 would be better for a 6 star monster.

[Sp1at]

EN003 ADDED!

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

I fail to see where these cards fall into the Psychic Class.

[Guest Lily]

I fail to see where these cards fall into the Psychic Class.

 

So do I

[Guest Zeonark]

I fail to see where these cards fall into the Psychic Class.

 

So do I

 

Ditto.

 

Also, aren't these kinda overpowered from making your opponent drop their deck? /:

[Sp1at]

ya but i'm going to make a drawback spell card. so that if you draw it you must play it and it will make you pay 500 life points each turn. but that card will allow you to discard 1 more card in the effects.

[Epic Inciser]

First off, it's probably my laptop, but I can't see the first card's pic, so I can't give it a solid rating.

 

Second off, Arder is way to powerful, regardless of it's 0 DEF. It also has a pretty plain effect.

 

Aber has some capitalization errors like:

 

Battle = battle

Discard = discard

 

Also, "Oce" in Aber's effect should probably be "Once", unless you don't know any grammer and put that on purpose.

 

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I guess that's it. Umm..... 6/10? It's a pretty decent set.

[Sp1at]

ya i will lower arder's atk

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

I fail to see where these cards fall into the Psychic Class.

 

So do I

 

Ditto.

 

Also' date=' aren't these kinda overpowered from making your opponent drop their deck? /:

[/quote']

 

Agreed. And your solution to this wont help. That will not be enough of a drawback. You need to vastly lower the amount of cards your opponent sends to the grave. Leave it at 2 or 1. It seems like you think it can be Lightsworn inverse and remain Balanced. Thats false.

[WTF]

physic i dont think suits the cards

 

 

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

your newest card is also balanced out, OCG looks fine too

 

the only thing I have a problem with is I don't quite see how it has anything to do with psychics

 

9/10

[Sp1at]

well what type you think would fit?

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

What ever the picture resembles.

You could make them Psychic but:

1. The images do not fit

2. You would need to make them deal with either LP payment/LP gain/or Spell Card support. As those are what the Psychic-Types revolve around.

[PenguinZ]

i think they are a little oped... anyway 6/10

[Sp1at]

well other than Psychic my other choce is Insect