ryan990 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 "This card can only be activated while there is a face-up "Dragon Guardian" on your field. Negate the effect of the equiped monster." Too simple, and can be UP'd.Pic is stale (needs a background)Name should be capitalized properly. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Here's an OCG and Grammar fix: You can only activate this card while you control a "Dragon Guardian". Equip this card to 1 Face-Up monster and negate its effect. You should change the name of the card to something like Guardian Nullify. If not capitalize G in Guardian and the H in Healer.Also you should change the card to Spell because Equip Cards are mostly always Spell cards if not add the Text, "This card is treated as an Equip Spell.", to the begging of the Card Effect and make it a normal trap. Current Rating is 2/10 b/c it's kind of dull and UP'ed pic is also bad change it to something to fit the card name and effect. Use this Pic if you want here's the code http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/Pixiv/nkfjdsfnreafjra.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Effect is to simple pic isn't that great neither is OCG 4/10 is my rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 the OCG errors have been pointed out already right now the effect is way too short, and it's too dull, you need to give it another effect 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 its rlly Uped, easy to get rid of and is pretty much a waste of a S/T zone, + the OCG errors, 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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