My First Fusion Set

[Shadoeh]

These are a few of my cards that I made a Fusion set out of. Please tell me what you think.

 

[KelinYo]

I gotta say, the set is pretty cool, but I think Evil Wing is a little over powered. But other than that, its all awesome.

[Shadoeh]

I gotta say' date=' the set is pretty cool, but I think Evil Wing is a little over powered. But other than that, its all awesome.

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Thank you, I'll take care of it. Evil Wings attack is supposed to be Light Wings defense. lol Stupid me.

[ChaosMuramasa]

OCG Fixes:

 

Evil Wing:

When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Light Wing the White Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

Light Wing:

When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Evil Wing the Black Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

Light Wing the Evil Dragon:

For every LIGHT monster in your hand, this card gains 300 DEF. For every DARK monster in your hand, this card gains 300 ATK.

 

The effects of the first two are just a little overdone. Being able to Special Summon the other from hand, Deck, or Graveyard is kind of a bit much. Maybe a restriction? Such as, "The card Special Summoned by this effect cannot attack this turn." Or maybe you can just make it so that it Special Summons from the Graveyard or when you Summon it you can add the opposite dragon from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

If you want to make a specific card to summon the fusion, you're probably better off making a Ritual. Unless the Fusion Monster states otherwise, all Fusion Cards can be Special Summoned with Polymerization.

 

The fusion has a very interesting effect. I like it alot. It's pretty overpowered though; might wanna drop it to maybe 2300 to 2600, considering it can already power itself up.

 

If you're going to make Evil Wing have 2100 ATK, you might want to up it to 5 stars so it needs 1 tribute so it can be balanced and fair. Otherwise, you should drop it to 4 stars like Light Wing.

 

For your first set, it was very good, and the few OCG errors you had weren't even that bad. 8.5 / 10.

[Shadoeh]

Thanks. Maybe I'll just make it so that you can only use the Specail effect for Evil Wing instead of Light Wing. I could just make LIght Wing a normal monster. And I will probably just make Fianl Option a Ritual.

[ragnarok1945]

all the pics are blurry

 

along with some overused ones, though that can be overlooked since you're new

 

OCG errors have been pointed out already, and the first two cards have too short effects

 

8/10