Dragon™ Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 [align=center][Yet another one of my part-set somewhat with a feeling of single, except with three of em, but still not. Enjoy.] Deathstar Aberation -Lore-When this card is in face-up Defense Position on your side of the field during your Main Phase 1, you and your opponent must destroy one or more monster on their side of the field. For each card that is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by the effect of this card except the first one, all of your and your opponent's monsters in face-up Attack Position gain 1000 ATK and DEF. This effect cannot be activated more than 3 times. [spoiler=Card]LoreWhen one of your opponent's monsters are destroyed while this card is in face-up Defense Position, place 1 Bite Counter on this card. If there are 3 Bite Counters on this card you can remove them to Special Summon 1 monster, Spell, or Trap Card from your Graveyard and randomly remove from play 1 Monster, Spell, or Trap Card from your opponent's Hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you must destroy 1 monster during each of your Main Phases. Only 1 "Nefarious Cloud" can be face-up on the field at a time. [spoiler=Card]LoreWhen this card is Summoned, place it and all monsters on the field to their respective owner's Spell & Trap Card Zone. All Spell and Trap Cards must be placed in their respective owner's monster Card Zone. Once per turn, if there are monster cards in your Spell and Trap Card Zone, destroy one of them to change all effects of a face-up Spell or Trap Card to: May be OP as fuk. [spoiler=Card]LoreThis card can only be activated when you have less than 3000 Life Points and 1 monster on your side of the field. Pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field and increase your and your opponent's Life Points 200x for each card that was destroyed. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you and your opponent can only control 1 monster on their side of the field at a time, and you must pay 200 Life Points each turn during your Main Phase. This card can be destroyed by its respective owner any time without using a monster, Spell, or Trap Card effect. [spoiler=Card]LoreThis card cannot be destroyed by LIGHT or DARK monsters. When this card is flipped face-up, all "Death Slasher" cards on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by LIGHT or DARK monsters. For each "Death Slasher" card that is affected by one of this card's effect(s), you must pay 100 Life Points each turn during your Standby Phase. If a Spell or Trap Card is activated by your opponent, you can Tribute 1 "Death Slasher" monster to negate the effect. Note: OCG might be rusty, haven't made cards in a while.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Bump... Err....Rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Their shields can't repel ATK points of that magnitude! But no seriously, it's a pretty neat effect. It's a little unclear - as in, the boost doesn't activate the first time the destruction happens, or what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 OCG Fix:While you control this face-up Defense Position monster, during each of your Main Phases, both players must destroy 1 or more monster(s) they control. For each monster sent to the Graveyard in this way, all face-up Attack Position monsters gain 1000 ATK and DEF. Until your Standby Phase after this effect was first activated, negate this card's effect. This effect cannot be activated more than 3 times per Duel. Odd, but could help a "Lightsworn" or Zombie Deck too much; dumping monsters into the Graveyard to Summon "Judgment Dragon" or power-up "King of the Skull Servants". I think you should decrease the ATK and DEF gain, or just remove the DEF gain, since they're in Attack Position. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Max Darkness pointed out the OCG already I'd cut the atk/def boost to just 500, this is already a killer in zombie decks 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 OCG Fix:While you control this face-up Defense Position monster' date=' during each of your Main Phases, both players must destroy 1 or more monster(s) they control. For each monster sent to the Graveyard in this way, all face-up Attack Position monsters gain 1000 ATK and DEF. Until your Standby Phase after this effect was first activated, negate this card's effect. This effect cannot be activated more than 3 times per Duel. Odd, but could help a "Lightsworn" or Zombie Deck too much; dumping monsters into the Graveyard to Summon "Judgment Dragon" or power-up "King of the Skull Servants". I think you should decrease the ATK and DEF gain, or just remove the DEF gain, since they're in Attack Position. 8/10[/quote'] For the OCG.... It seems your trying to fix it with new OCG... Anyway, thanks for the ratings all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Effects are ok.OCG is ok exept this "Special Summon 1 Monster, Spell or Trap.." You cannot Summon a (plain) Spell or Trap.Pics are good.A 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Lol Summoning a Spell or Trap what was I thinking! Thanks for the rating ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I've never had a card thread up this long... Keep the ratings going/bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spymoft Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 the first is a psychic type, you automatically get 10/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Well, thanks - but why would you give me 10/10 cause its Psychic? Bump too... More ratings pl0x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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