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[align=justify]Those 2 circle "moon" things don't seem to fit, they just don't go with the BG they're directly in front of. Liking the effects, five that "spacey" look. In the distant background, it doesn't look too appealing since it doesn't seem to go with everything else, but for a photomanip, it fits. Render could be less blurry, but that's just my opinion. Overall, not bad for your fist.

 

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Um they work fine o.o I know from the comments ive been getting from people who are way way way better than me.....

 

I'm more in awe over the fact that someone had the balls to give me a 2 when my work is better than alot of the garbage posted here o.o

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im not in love with it, but its nice

what happened to "dont put ur fx over the focal u"

xD

 

anyways, IMHO theres a bit too many stars or whatever over the person, and the planets could be blended a bit better, one of the ways i've found to be a good idea would be to take your initial background stock, and copy visible, then select the planets, and make like a clipipng mask using the planets, then set the new layer to soft light or whatever it is in ps

 

also the line between the orange colors and the grey near your middle of the lp could be blended a bit together moar

 

one question tho, what did you use to make the green on her head?

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Um not a render and as for the effects they were already there mister Sid, as for the green it was very very dull and i simply used my knowledge of the dodge and burn tool along with adjustments and the soft brush. The moons are more of a mg, their positions make it so you have to get a look at the focal, then they bring your eyes back and forth between the focal. The fog is suppose to be slowly engulfing the oceanic bg, which helps the "The End" like theme of the piece and do trust me about the moons here, they have 3 layers just to themselves to fit the orange and blue contrast in the piece and they also work with the green.

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