Legendary Voltaic! - A Brighter Future!

[Legendary Voltaic]

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I got another e-mail from Mousy. It contained the following card...

 

Once during your Main Phase, select 1 card from either player's Graveyard and return it to the bottom of its respectives owner's Deck. Then your opponent selects 1 card from either player's Graveyard and returns it to the bottom of their respective owner's Decks. The controller of this card can pay 500 Life Points to have their opponent not select a card.

 

Inscribed was:

Faut-il nous quitter sans espoir

Sans espoir de retour ?

Faut-il nous quitter sans espoir

De nous revoir un jour ?

 

Should we leave without hope, and without hope to return?

Should we leave without hope, and say good bye to day?

 

Is the translation of above. The more important part:

 

Should old acquaintance be forgot,

and never brought to mind?

Should old acquaintance be forgot,

and old lang syne?

 

Touching(?)

Original Cards

If this card is Normal Summoned, the original ATK of this card becomes 1900, and negate this card's effect. This card can be Special Summoned from the Deck if it is at the bottom of your Deck. During your Standby Phase, increase the ATK of this card by 300. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. This card inflicts Piercing Damage.

 

Thanks for reading! I know my OCG is really off. I haven't made cards in ages.

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[WTF]

OCG is pretty good

 

effect is good to

 

i like it

 

7/10

[Legendary Voltaic]

Thanks for the rate!

[ragnarok1945]

"to have their opponent not select a card" sounds a little weird for OCG

 

the rest of the OCG is just fine though

 

you misspelled Machine in the type for the 2nd card

 

8/10