latin for "imperial keeper"

[mnash]

 

i need a little help with the ocg... it would be greatly appreciated

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Sorry... Here's the lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by destroying the top 5 cards of your deck. This card is not effected by opponent's Spells, Traps, and Monster Effects. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot declare an Attack on any monster other than this monster. Each time your opponent declares an Attack on this monster, remove the top card of your deck from play. The attacking monster is not destroyed. Do not skip the Damage Step. If this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, during your next Standby Phase you may pay 3000 Life Points to Special Summon this card back to the field.

[MysticWater]

If you are going to post your cards in this section, please put a Real Type.

 

8 Stars seems a bit much.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending the top 5 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card is not effected by your opponent's Spells, Traps, and Monster Card Effects. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot declare an Attack on any monster other than this monster. Each time your opponent declares an Attack on this monster, remove the top card of your deck from play. If this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, during your next Standby Phase you can pay 3000 Life Points to Special Summon this card onto your field.

[mnash]

 

sry i wasn't sure what to put for the type cuz i didn't want to put divine down

[MysticWater]

It's fine.

 

The card looks better.

 

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

guardian isn't a type

 

better if you put Spellcaster as the type instead

 

not destroying the top 5 cards of your deck, DISCARDING the top 5 cards

 

not effected should be unaffected

 

change may to can

 

7.8/10

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Much OCG Mistakes (many newbies do this, don't worry)

Wrong Type (many newbies do this, don't worry)

Cool Name (not much newbies do this, cool)

Cool Pic (not much newbies do this, cool)

You didn't post some wrong-sectioned card (not much newbies do this, cool)

 

Overall 9/10 with newby bonuses. Maybe a little underpowered for the level.