Zombie Nurse

[Twin Seed]

 

When this card is Summoned, place 6 Manta Counters on it. Each time you activate a Trap Card during your Standby Phase, Draw Phase, or Main Phases 1 or 2, remove 1 Manta Counter from this card. When this card has 0 Manta Counters on it, remove it from play. If this card is removed from play because of it's effect, discard 2 cards from the bottom of your Deck to Special Summon it during your next End Phase, this effect cannot be negated. During your Battle Phase, you can check a number of cards from the bottom of your Deck until you reach a Level 3 or lower Effect Monster, your Deck is then shuffled. If it is a Zombie-Type monster, increase this card's ATK by 300 until the end of your Damage Step.

[DMZ]

Pic's not too impressive, but not bad either.

Attack = ATK

For the Deck search, you might want to add "Shuffle the Deck afterwards" or "The Deck is the shuffled" to keep things interesting.

 

Other than that, very nice card

 

9.1/10

[Twin Seed]

I can't believe I missed ATK, guess I rushed. Same thing for the shuffling. Will fix.

 

EDIT:

Fixed.

[Matico]

okey... i dont realy get it all...

 

"When this card is Summoned, place 6 Manta Counters on it. Each time you activate a Trap Card during your Standby Phase, Draw Phase, or Main Phases 1 or 2, remove 1 Manta Counter from this card. When this card has 0 Manta Counters on it, remove it from play. If this card is removed from play because of it's effect, discard 2 cards from the bottom of your Deck to Special Summon it during your next End Phase, this effect cannot be negated."

 

-so this basickly this say when you have activatd 6 Traps her ATK goes back to 2000ATK

and you discard 2 cards from the "bottom" of the deck. why the bottom?? i se no point it that.

 

"During your Battle Phase, you can check a number of cards from the bottom of your Graveyard until you reach a Level 3 or lower Effect Monster, your Deck is then shuffled. If it is a Zombie-Type monster, increase this card's ATK by 300. "

 

-and in the battle phase we look at what? the bottom of the Graveyard?? until we find a level 3 or lower effect monster. and if it a Zombie she get 300ATK more.

unless it was suposed to be the Deck we Search i dont know why we shuffle the deck afterward.

 

 

so i think we can be able to make something simular by use of less text, so we will be able to read the card, well this is my best atempt to short its Effect a little

 

*when this card is summoned add 6 Counters to it. each time you activate a Trap Remove 1 counter. when this card have 0 couters destroy it, you can then discard 2 cards from your deck to special soumon it in your End Phase. During your Battle Phase you can seach your Deck until you find a Level 3 or lower Effect monster if it a Zombie type increase this card's ATK by 300 then shuffle your Deck*

 

7/10

-Matico

[Twin Seed]

Bottom of your deck and graveyard is just to make it different :/

 

It's not a choice to discard the 2 cards.

 

The counters don't give it any extra attack, whered you get that?

 

No, not just 2 traps, 2 traps during those specific duel phases.

 

You search your graveyard, not deck.

[ragnarok1945]

nice and gory of a picture

 

the OCG errors have been pointed out already

 

it has its balanced effect, so I'll give it 9/10

[Twin Seed]

Oh, wait, I see what you meant. It was supposed to be deck instead of graveyard near the end, but I see no other OCG errors.

[~IceCold:.]

Great card, 9/10,,

[Twin Seed]

Thanks, and nice name, if you take off the "~" ":" and "." ^.^

[DeckCreater722]

Wicked Card dude, 9.532/10

[Twin Seed]

Thank you very much.

[~IceCold:.]

Thanks' date=' and nice name, if you take off the "~" ":" and "." ^.^

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Heheh,, Even though I prefer it with the "~", ":" and the ".",, ;)

[Rusty Shovel]

The name should be "Zombie Nurse - Manta"

 

Also, counters are not named. Tokens are. Should be "...place 6 counters on it..." etc.

 

-Rusty

[Twin Seed]

Are you sure about that? Show me a counter card that proves your point, and I'll change it.

[baily18]

The name should be "Zombie Nurse - Manta"

 

Also' date=' counters are not named. Tokens are. Should be "...place 6 counters on it..." etc.

 

-Rusty

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Wrong. On Spellcaster cards, they say "Spell Counters."

[Twin Seed]

Thanks baily, would you care to comment on the card now?