shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I know what the name says but it's not the Gods you are thinking about. The theme for my created deck was the Greek Gods. The Monster cards range from Titans, Demi-Gods, to Gods and most of the Spell and Trap cards deal with the Gods in a way. I will post all the cards as I finish them. *Note this is my first time posting cards so please be gentle. Also I need help with some of my other cards, so if anybody is willing to help I would be very grateful* [align=center][spoiler=[color=olive]Card Updates[/color]]1/21 8:40 PM Set Count: 34/60 TPM(Tuner Plus More)- Hades General - Hades Little Helper- Zeus Little Helper EDG(Effect Demi-Gods) - Jadan - Demi-God of Envy- Sephiro - Demi-God of Pain-Tenzo - Demi-God of Remorse NEDG(Non-Effect Demi-Gods) - All of them Gods - Dionysus - God of Madness- Hephaestus - God of Forge- Loki - God of Mischief Spells- Book of the Gods- Call to the Gods- Hercules Sword- Hermes Help- Sorrows Shield- Tree of Life Traps- Lokis Trick- Wrath of the Gods [spoiler=[color=purple]Tuners Plus More[/color]] When this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, , you can Special Summon 1 "God" monster with at least 2000 ATK When this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, you can pay 500 Life Points to have that Synchro Monster gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. [spoiler=[color=orange]Titans[/color]] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing "Atlas - Titan of Earth", "Oceanus - Titan of Water", "Phoebe - Titan of Air", and "Rhea - Titan of Fire" from your hand, Graveyard or your side of the field. You can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Atlas - Titan of Earth", "Oceanus - Titan of Water", "Phoebe - Titan of Air", and "Rhea - Titan of Fire" from your Graveyard. [spoiler=[color=red]Demi-Gods[/color]][spoiler=[color=cyan]Effect Demi-Gods[/color]]When this card is summoned return one of your opponent's monsters on the field to their hand. When this card is destoyed as a result of battle, destroy 1 monster on your opponents side of the Field. You can Normal Summon this card without Tributing. When this card is destroyed in battle return it to your hand. When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, this card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. Decrease the ATK of this card by half when you attack your opponents Life Points directly. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle look at the top 3 cards of your deck, rearrange them in any order desired, and replace them on the top of the deck. [spoiler=[color=black]Non-Effect Demi-Gods[/color]] [spoiler=[color=blue]Gods[/color]]During the turn that this card is Summoned, both you and your opponent must look at the top 5 cards in their Deck and discard any 2 cards. Then arrange the remaining cards in any order. When this card is Normal Summoned to the Field, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card is Summoned, select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it. During each of your Standby Phases, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field. If your opponent has no cards on the field, You can remove 1 card from his/her hand randomly instead. When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 "Demi-God" from your Deck or hand and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. During your Standby Phase on the turn after this card was Summoned, add up to 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you must remove from play at least 1 monster from your hand. Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 "Mischief" token to the field (Fiend-Type/Dark/Lv3/ATK1000/DEF1000). When a "Mischief" token is destroyed as a result of battle, you can take control of 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field until the end of your next turn. [spoiler=[color=green]Spells[/color]]This card can only be equipped to a monster with "God" in the name. increase the ATK and DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 500. As long as this card remains on the Field, a player is allowed an extra Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be equipped to a monster with "God" in the name. Increase the ATK and DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 1000. When your opponents monster attacks a monster with "God" in the name. You can Special Summon a monster with the same Level as the attacking monster from your Graveyard or hand. Your opponent's monster must attack the card that was Special Summoned. You must pay 400 Life Points for every turn this card remains on the field. As long as this card remains on the field your monsters can not be attacked. Discard the top 3 cards in your Deck to increase your Life Points by 3000. [spoiler=[color=yellow]Traps[/color]] Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the graveyard. Special Summon one monster with the same level from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. Activate only during your end phase. Destroy all cards on the field and in both player's hand. You can only activate this card when your opponent's monster declares an attack. Select 2 Lv4 monsters from your deck and 1 monster on your side of the field. Shuffle those 3 cards and Set them on the field in face-down Defense Position. When your opponent destroys a Lv4 monster, inflict 700 damage to your opponents Life Points. When a Level 6 or higher monster with the name "God" is destroyed as a result of battle, your opponent must send every card on the field, in their hand, and the top 3 cards from their deck to the Graveyard. [/align] *Disclaimer - Credit for each pic used above goes to JayzinKay* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosMuramasa Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 AthenaThe effect is pretty original and your OCG isn't really that bad. The picture's real nice too, I like it. Is the effect meant for both players to do? The way you worded it made it so that both players look at your top 5 cards specifically and then discard 2 cards. Who gets to choose to discard? My stab at an OCG Fix, but I think I'm slightly off:When this card is Summoned, pick up and see the top 5 cards of your Deck. You must show them to your opponent. Your opponent selects 2 of those cards to send to the Graveyard. Arrange the rest in any order desired, and replace them on the top of the Deck. I'm think I'm off a little. Hopefully an expert steps into this thread and fixes it up to be perfect. I tried though. HestiaNice effect again. Balanced well and the picture is great. Only thing I can notice that's odd is how you're basically giving them the option to remove from play more than 1 monster when it's destroyed by saying "at least". Another stab at an OCG Fix:During your Standby Phase on the turn after this card was Summoned, add up to 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you must remove from play at least 1 monster from your hand. Nice cards. Doing really good so far. 9 / 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 You were right the effect is for both players and they chose what two cards to discard. Thanks for the comments.I edit and changed the you to their, hope thats fixes the confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Hestia is the Goddess of the Hearth btw Good cards I like the pics i like the effects his OCG is fine if it's for what i think its for so i'll give 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I looked it up on Google it said Life, Hearth, and some other stuff. I just went with life because it fits with the deck theme. Thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 both monster effects slightly on the short end Hestia's pic look best though and since the OCG errors have been pointed out, I'll give this 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I added a few more cards to the set. Please rate, comment, and tell me what I need to fix. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Added Hades - God of Death Please tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 hey...i wonder who helped w/ teh god cards XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 When their all finished i'm going give you credit for helping me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draconic Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Athena is a Already a fariy card...you disgraced it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Athena is a Already a fariy card...you disgraced it. How did I disgrace it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 well, not bad.....make more.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Thanks Majestic and I am. The set is about 60-65 cards, so I have a lot more to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Hello again, I just added about 23 cards to this set. Please rate and comment I would really like to know what I did wrong and what I did good. Thanks~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckCreater722 Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 good cards u got there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Thanks, I took a look at yours and they are pretty good as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Somebody, anybody please give me feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Please rate and comment my current cards. I'll have the rest of the set up later on today. Thanks~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 other than the cards that i helped with...the all are pretty awesome 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 is lumina the ligthsworn summoner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 I don't understand your question? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow3150 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Rate and comment please. I would really like to know what people think about my first set so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 hestia is lumina Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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