Lady_Killer Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Lore1 Dark tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters.If this card attacks a Defence Position monster your opponent controls, Destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. You can tribute this card to Negate the activation of a Spell card, Trap card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field and, destoy that card. If you negate an effect this way you may Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. LoreThis card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special summoned by Tributing one "Black Dragon of Hades." For each Dragon monster in your Graveyard increast this cards ATK and DEF x300. If this card attacks a Defence Position monster your opponent controls, Destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. You can tribute this card to Negate the activation of a Spell card, Trap card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field and, destoy that card. If you negate an effect this way you may Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. Plz rate and tell me how i can improve the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 First, welcome to YCM.let see this cards:)first card: some OCG errors: " 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters", "If this card attacks an Defense Position opponent monster, destroy all opponent's monsters on the field with this card effect." The rest of the effect is a copy paste of the Stardust Dragon effect:( the idea is good but the originality of the effect is bad, you only copy a real card effect. rate for this 3/10(you do a stardust dragon with more stars and a extra effect, but nothing new:( )second card: OCG errors: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Black Dragon of Hades" you control. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300 x each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster your opponent controls, destroy all opponent's monsters on the field with this card effect. " The same problem with the other card. you added a new intersting effect, but copy and paste the stardust dragon effect again:( i know that you are new, but please be creative and do your own effects:( 4/10 i hope that you can think in this oppinions do the changes and try again. good luck:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I thank you for your words of wisdom however. . . what is OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakun62 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 I thank you for your words of wisdom however. . . what is OCG Click Click on it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 not bad in terms of card effects the only problem is they're WAY too similar from siphoned effects off Stardust Dragon, which makes them uncreative 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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