Check out my New Dragon cards (7/???)

[taiyouai]

Made these today, Edited the pictures myself, Covering Mist the actual picture looks better >< had to crop it to make it look good... but yea fix any OCG errors please, still learning.

As for the effects I don't believe they are Op'd

Hope you like them, comment / rate / all that stuff.

 

[spoiler=Shinokami Dragon]

Shinokami Dragon = Death god Dragon (In Japanese) (Thanks to morfowt for help with the name.)

 

 

[spoiler=Covering Mist]

 

 

[spoiler=Spark Dragon]

 

 

[spoiler=Sparkling Dragon]

[spoiler=Lore]

This card can only be special summed by the card "Spark Dragon". For every Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard and on your side of the field this card gains 200 ATK and DEF. By paying 1500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly. Once this cards ATK is 3300 it stops gaining ATK. When this card's ATK is 3300 you can destroy this card and both players take 3300 Life Point damage.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prowling Drake]

 

 

[spoiler=Fire Dragon's Lair]

 

 

[spoiler=Dragon Eggs]

 

 

All pictures were found on Google and edited by me ^^.

[ragnarok1945]

1st card has too simple of an effect, give it another one

 

same with the 2nd card, and there's OCG errors on it

 

6/10

[taiyouai]

1st card has too simple of an effect' date=' give it another one

 

same with the 2nd card, and there's OCG errors on it

 

6/10

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Change the effects a little, and think if fixed the OCG >.> If I didn't please tell me what to fix.

I updated / changed / made the pictures on "Covering Mist" Better ^^ (YEY Photoshop.)

[taiyouai]

Bump 2 new cards added. Hope you like them.

[morfowt]

for the first card, I believe the word you're looking for is "hakai" which means destroy. "takai" means tall (or at least one of the words is).

 

(I'm japanese, in a way)

[taiyouai]

for the first card' date=' I believe the word you're looking for is "hakai" which means destroy. "takai" means tall (or at least one of the words is).

 

(I'm japanese, in a way)

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Oh thanks, I looked it up on some random website, I'll change it here in a little.

[ragnarok1945]

graveyard should be Graveyard

 

the rest of the OCG on the two new ones look pretty good

 

for Sparkling Dragon's 2nd to last sentence, you should say "By paying 1500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly"

 

And the last sentence, 3900 atk is too much, lower it down to 3100ish

 

7.8/10

[taiyouai]

graveyard should be Graveyard

 

the rest of the OCG on the two new ones look pretty good

 

for Sparkling Dragon's 2nd to last sentence' date=' you should say "By paying 1500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly"

 

And the last sentence, 3900 atk is too much, lower it down to 3100ish

 

7.8/10

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Thanks and I changed the effect on Sparkling Dragon

dropped it down to 3300 (so 1k more ATK then it started with) and made it so it isn't immediately destroyed you can keep it at 3300 but it can't gain any more ATK then that, does the OCG still look good ? (My OCG is horrible lol)

[ragnarok1945]

it's a start for an improvement, I'll raise my rate to 8.1/10

[taiyouai]

Bump 1 Vanilla added =D

[ragnarok1945]

well in that case you're going to need more than ONE spell support for this set

[taiyouai]

well in that case you're going to need more than ONE spell support for this set

 

I have an idea for like 3 spell cards just haven't made them yet, and I've got and idea for a single trap >< I have like no ideas for traps lol

[ragnarok1945]

all right, then you just let us know when you put those up

[taiyouai]

Bump 2 new Magic cards (Later I will sort them into Monster, and Magic/Trap)

[ragnarok1945]

FIRE monsters, not FIRE attribute monsters (we already know FIRE is an attribute)

 

there's some grammar errors on the cards too, but you're getting better

 

7.9/10

[xXJianXx]

Ummm.... I think you mean Shinigami Dragon for the 1st Card Z(Shinigami = Death God [thanks a lot Death Note xD {jking}])

Anyways i find the pics a little bit LQ =/

 

Pics: 5/10

 

OCG: 7/10

 

Originality: 5/10 (I find Dragons WAY overused these days, i used to make them myself until i noticed this)

 

Total: 5.7/10

 

I think you just should check OCG and trying to find some new pics ( this is just a suggestion its just up to your decision...)

[morfowt]

I suppose shinigami works too. they both translate to death god more or less. But I guess shinigami might be more accurate since it autmatically became kanji when I typed it.