[MW] Knightly Set [6/??]

[MysticWater]

[align=center]Here are some cards that I just made. I do plan on making more, but for now, there are gonna have to do.

 

Constructive Criticism, Please.

 

"The Loyal Troop" + "Pegasus - The Steed"

When this card attacks, no Trap Cards can be activated. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "The Loyal Troop" and 1 "Pegasus - The Steed" cards from your Graveyard. They are destroyed at the End Phase of your next turn.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Warrior-Type monster on your field. Once per turn, you tribute 1 Warrior-Type monster on your field to have this card gain ATk equal to the Level of the tributed monster x100. Any card that battles this card is destroyed at the end of the Battle Phase.

 

Control of this monster cannot switch.

 

During each of your End Phases, if this card has destroyed an opponent's monster by battle and sent it to the Graveyard this turn, increase your Life Points by 600. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's Card Effect, increase your Life Points by 1000.

 

When this card is tributed for a Tribute Summon, increase your Life Points by 1000. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, add 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand at the end of the turn that this card was Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, destroy all non-Warrior-Type monsters on the field. You receive damage equal to the number of monsters destroyed by this effect x300

 

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[ragnarok1945]

Loyal Troop's effect is too dull, give it another effect

 

the same with Trinity: The Final Hope

 

there's only minor OCG errors, so it's quite good for a new member

 

8/10

[MysticWater]

Will do.

 

Mind pointing our the errors for me?

[ragnarok1945]

for example, gain 1000 Life Points should be increase your Life Points by 1000

[MysticWater]

for example' date=' gain 1000 Life Points should be increase your Life Points by 1000

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I will change them. Thanks.