leevn Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 This is my first cardI hope i can make more beautiful card :) I speak English very poorly :))I'm so happy to be acquainted with you Update.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cold Assassin Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Lots of OCG mistakes but ur new so.. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 don't use fake types.first card is effect, not spirit. It's effect should say, "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 10 card in your Deck from play. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you Special Summon this card."ATK and DEF can only end in 00 or 50you need "" around card names in an effect.The last 2 aren't Gemini's and Toon's.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Not bad, I guess. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Pics are overused...Fake-Types, OCG errors, Cap. Errors... 3.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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