Lady_Killer Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Its actually not that bad you just have spelling errors as far as i can see. And you can get a dictionary for that one. Oh and if you do think you need help on OCG, Goes to WWW.Yugiohmint.COM[spoiler=Genesis Dragon]"This card can only be summoned by sending lichen regrowth, lichen warrior, lichen prince, and lichen lichen to the graveyard. While this card is on the field no card with Genesis in its name can be destroyed(excluding Genesis Dragon and Genesis King). this card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every plant monster on the field." Should be. . ."This card can only be Special Summoned by sending Lichen Regrowth, Lichen Warrior, Lichen Prince, and Lichen Lichen On your side of the field to the Graveyard. While this card is on the field, no card with Genesis in its name can be destroyed by battle,(excluding Genesis Dragon and Genesis King). this card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every plant monster on the field."Oh and Lower the ATK to say 2000, since it has a way of powering itself up. [spoiler=Genesis Garden]"Play only when Genesis Tree is on the field. You my also summon Genesis Regrowth, Genesis Warrior, Genesis Queen, and Genesis King. All face up plant monsters can not be destroyed." Should be. . .This card can only be activated while Genesis Tree is on the field. When you activate this card, Special Summon 1 Genesis Regrowth, Genesis Warrior, Genesis Queen, and Genesis King from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. All face-up, Plant-Type monsters on your side of the field cannot be destoyed by battle. When Genesis Tree is removed from the field, destoy this card. [spoiler=Genesis King]"While the Genesis Tree and Garden is on the field no monster with Genesis in its name can be destroyed excluding Genesis King. once per turn you can destroy one card on the field. excluding Genesis King." Should be. . .While Genesis Tree and Genesis Garden are face-up on the field, all monsters you control cannot be effected by Spells and Traps, (excluding Genesis King and Genesis Dragon.) Once per turn, by removing from play 1 Plant-Type monster in your Graveyard, You may destroy 1 card on the field, excluding Genesis King. Will post the rest Later. I'm going to work on these cards 3 at a time, otherwise my computer f***s on on me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 yay ocg is getting even better.btw people if you see a spelling mistake let me know ive got dislexia so i cant spell that well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 you know if this thread doesnt get somemore comments soon then im gonna end up closing it. people plz comment and tell me what ya think this is my first set so i need some people to cretece it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantm-Trashcan Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 em.. you should still work on ocg. cuz this was more than a little off. also the art was varying. some were great...some just okay. eitherway... plants scare me lol.btw, ive got dislexia too so just go slow, be carefull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 em.. you should still work on ocg. cuz this was more than a little off. also the art was varying. some were great...some just okay. eitherway... plants scare me lol.btw' date=' ive got dislexia too so just go slow, be carefull.[/quote']good plants should scare you and pardon the cheesy quote but every rose has its thorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted March 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDevil27 Posted March 5, 2010 Report Share Posted March 5, 2010 You need to work on the OCG.I like the deck, but some cards don`t have backgrounds.TallGrass Warrior doesn`t have a type. WTFI just finished my set and i know how hard it is. The ideas are pretty cool.Just needs some work and it will be perfect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted March 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 ty im glad someone else likes it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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