-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 [align=center]Mainly, i made this card cuz the pic just had to be used in a card! I luv it^^About the effect: You can search for ANY card in your deck and add it to your hand. In an instant. OP? Look at the card and decide for yourself. [image: Me]LoreThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by discarding 2 cards. You can remove this face-up card from play to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot Summon any monsters in the turn you activated this effect. Special Summon this card during the End Phase of your next turn.[/align] Rate or Hate, whatever you prefer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 ...Good sir.I'm going to love Double Judgment Dragon searching with this guy. Also, that name is a lol because of OUTTA. I'm not sure about the last part, since it doesn't state when it gets to be Special Summoned, like if it activated it's effect or not. But I dunno how to word that. >_> Nais card is Nais.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Fix:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. You can discard 2 cards to Special Summon this card from your hand. You can remove this card from play to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot Summon any monsters the turn you activated this effect. During your next End Phase, Special Summon this card. Balanced, though easy to get a strong monster by only discarding 2 cards maybe lower the ATK to 2100 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 thanks dudes. Will think about your points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 A little OP I would change its ATK to 15009/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Great card. I love the pic and the effect seems balanced to me. 9.5/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 To Op.Pic is great. Name: Outta, Lol.Good OCG.Maybe remove the return part?A 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 it returns during your next End Phase after you activated the effect, so you have to wait 2 turns in order to use it's effect again Did you considered that? Anyways, thanks all^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 smexeh card is smexeh. Nice it's like a SanganStardust Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Reword it to "the End Phase of your next turn", else it might be considered to try and return on the End Phase of the turn you use it, since it's the next one to happen. Interesting card. Feels like it'd be broken in something, but it can't activate its effect during the turn you Summon it, so it seems okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks griffin for that fix. Changed the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 it returns during your next End Phase after you activated the effect' date=' so you have to wait 2 turns in order to use it's effect again Did you considered that? Anyways, thanks all^^[/quote'] Yes I did, but it would kill with JD/Exodia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 that are 2 ways to use this card.... and there are even more=D it's a bit OP. True^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 A very good picture and effect ;) Might be a tiny pit OP 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Very Cool Pic HP DOOM and good OCG9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 What acould I do with this card? Well... I could always paint it a solid color. Maybe I could hang it from a tree. Maybe as an ornament on a Christmas tree. I could definately use it to test out my new paper shredder.If I get too hungry, I'll eat it.If I need to write something down, it could be used as a note pad. But more importantly... Where do you remove it from? The Graveyard? The field? Your hand? Any of these ways will result in your opponent being completely outta luck. Even if you only have a few cards left in your hand and you have to run outta them to Summon this card, it's well worth it. The effect is unike, and I like it a lot. It does seem I'm outta luck playing him though, as I use a DARK deck. Oh well. I'm outta here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 it's supposed to remove it from play from your field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Then. [spoiler=Replace the sentence with...]You can remove this face-up monster from play to add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. Great card, great pic, great everything about the card, just fix the OCG. The pic reminds me of Worm Idilan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 k, changed the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Nice effect and OCG!I don't like the pic, though. D:~9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 i luv this pic! altough you don't like this awesome pic, thanks dude^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 That's just a crappy BG with a cool render on it IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I think the most important thing with the pic on all cards, is that the pic itself fits the name, Type and Attribute (not that the pic itself is cool, although it doesn't hurt to have a cool pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrGamer365 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 A. Infernity booster, good.B. I like this card.C. It is a bit OP'd. Maybe make it harder to summon, or make a limit to the search, like normal monsters, ATK/DEF of 1500 or less, or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 that fiend has been eating WAY too many doughnuts you misspelled "except" in the text that's about it for OCG should have made it lv6 for 2300 atk though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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