Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 [align=center]Hello everyone. It's a bit obvious that I love fish, isn't it? D:So as I'm registered now, I decided to make cards. I HAVE checked the Official Grammar Thread, so I don't see errors in my grammar. But if you guys find it... Just say and I'll fix it. You guys don't need to think: "Oh, he is new, so I won't be harsh..." NO. I need criticism to grow better. So, to the card. Sailfish [/align] Thanks for viewing ^_^~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Cool card! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapahael Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 That's a very nice first card! You will be famous this way :D:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I hope so, raphael71 ^_^ Thanks. I would like more comments. It is going soooo slow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Since this is AoC. I won't say the pic is lifelike. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I posted it here because of this. The pic is too realistic to be posted in Realistic Cards Section. I am very happy, I have received a 10/10 from a member with 7000+ posts! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenogears Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Really nice for a new member ;D.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks Nero1010100! Didn't you find any grammar error? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 For a new member this is quite good 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks, though I would like to know why you gave me this rate. I mean, giving a 10/10, you don't really need to say why, the rate says everything. But when it's less than 10/10 you need an explanation. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Pretty good for a first card. I smell Potential. :D Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks Dark Lightning, I apreciatte your comment :') I hope I have potential to do it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks' date=' though I would like to know why you gave me this rate. I mean, giving a 10/10, you don't really need to say why, the rate says everything. But when it's less than 10/10 you need an explanation. :)[/quote'] A bit UP'd and pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 UP'd - Why?Pic - Because this it is in "AoC", dude. I don't see why drop the rate just because of the pic, seeing where I posted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Cool card! 8/10 You should post reasons, instead of just saying that. good OCG. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks, Xion 27. I don't like people who only rate and don't give critics. They are all such spammers '-' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lefty Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 great first card you made!im not relly good with OCG errors but i dont think u got 1 error!awesome ;)10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenogears Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Can you post the lore?So someother user can check if is there some OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks ItchMyController ^_^ I'm boring to post the lore now... I do it later '-' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chalenged Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I saw a few errors in it, like it says you can look at opponents card and destroy, but should say discard. And for the first part you can say "If you control at least 3 Fish-Type monsters, you can tribute one to special summon this card." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 The first sentence is right, but thanks for the discard part ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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