Fish's 1ST Card :')

[Fish ~]

[align=center]Hello everyone. It's a bit obvious that I love fish, isn't it? D:

So as I'm registered now, I decided to make cards. I HAVE checked the Official Grammar Thread, so I don't see errors in my grammar. But if you guys find it... Just say and I'll fix it. You guys don't need to think: "Oh, he is new, so I won't be harsh..." NO. I need criticism to grow better. So, to the card.

 

Sailfish

 

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Thanks for viewing ^_^~

[Teh ZWOOTS]

Cool card! 8/10

[Rapahael]

That's a very nice first card!

 

You will be famous this way :D:D:D:D

[Fish ~]

I hope so, raphael71 ^_^

 

Thanks. I would like more comments. It is going soooo slow.

[Jolta]

Since this is AoC. I won't say the pic is lifelike.

 

10/10

[Fish ~]

I posted it here because of this.

 

The pic is too realistic to be posted in Realistic Cards Section.

 

I am very happy, I have received a 10/10 from a member with 7000+ posts! ^_^

[Xenogears]

Really nice for a new member ;D.

10/10

[Fish ~]

Thanks Nero1010100!

 

Didn't you find any grammar error?

[Dranzer]

For a new member this is quite good 8.2/10

[Fish ~]

Thanks, though I would like to know why you gave me this rate.

 

I mean, giving a 10/10, you don't really need to say why, the rate says everything. But when it's less than 10/10 you need an explanation.

 

:)

[Dark Lightning]

Pretty good for a first card. I smell Potential. :D Keep it up

[Fish ~]

Thanks Dark Lightning, I apreciatte your comment :')

 

I hope I have potential to do it ^_^

[Dranzer]

Thanks' date=' though I would like to know why you gave me this rate.

 

I mean, giving a 10/10, you don't really need to say why, the rate says everything. But when it's less than 10/10 you need an explanation.

 

:)

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A bit UP'd and pic

[Fish ~]

UP'd - Why?

Pic - Because this it is in "AoC", dude. I don't see why drop the rate just because of the pic, seeing where I posted it.

[Aero~]

Cool card! 8/10

 

You should post reasons, instead of just saying that.

 

good OCG. 9/10

[Fish ~]

Thanks, Xion 27.

 

I don't like people who only rate and don't give critics. They are all such spammers '-'

[Lefty]

great first card you made!

im not relly good with OCG errors but i dont think u got 1 error!

awesome ;)

10/10

[Xenogears]

Can you post the lore?

So someother user can check if is there some OCG errors.

[Fish ~]

Thanks ItchMyController ^_^

 

I'm boring to post the lore now... I do it later '-'

[chalenged]

I saw a few errors in it, like it says you can look at opponents card and destroy, but should say discard. And for the first part you can say "If you control at least 3 Fish-Type monsters, you can tribute one to special summon this card."

[Fish ~]

The first sentence is right, but thanks for the discard part ^^