Tiaguinho247 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 what do u think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I think the right grammar is: This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK card in both Player's Graveyard. Seems a bit overpowered to me, though, but for a first card I wouldn't say it is bad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 -Image is okay.-Do not add descriptions with effects. It's either a Normal Monster or an Effect. If an Effect, then it should be:"This card gains 100 ATK for every DARK monster in both player's Graveyard."-The effect is a bit too unoriginal. Overall, it's a meh card. The stats are slightly fair for its effect. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiaguinho247 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 ok, im PT, i don't domine english very well xD i did other, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Monster Card :OPBad OCG 6/10 Spell Card :Bad OCG but 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiaguinho247 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 whts OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Official Card Grammar. It's just the grammar used in the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Monster Card :OPBad OCG 6/10 Spell Card :Bad OCG but 8/10 This said all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nero™ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 [spoiler=Monster card Rating]The pic's greatOCG:Needs workHeres the proper OCG thanxs to Starly_64This card gains 100 ATK for every DARK monster in both player's Graveyard.Overall 5.5/10 [spoiler=Spell Card]The effect Needs work again just almost right also great picOverall 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chalenged Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 If you need help with OCG, go to Yu-Gi-Oh Wikia and look up the type of card you are making, like effect monster, feild spell, w/e. Reading card effects is very helpful for grasping OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiaguinho247 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 ty everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.E.B. DRAGON Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 nice images bad ogc and pure naming but good enough for a newbie 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiaguinho247 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 As novas http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-183158.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 OCG correction is up already and this card's effect is dull as hell, needs more right away for it 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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