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Brand New Earthbound Immortal by me


dimitri

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other new one by me

good or not?

its based on the ant

 

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"Only 1 "Earthbound Immortal" monster can be face-up on the field. When there is no Field Spell Card face-up on the field, this card is destroyed. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. During your Main Phase, you can remove this card and 1 monster on your opponent side of the field from play to infict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of your opponent monster removed by this cards effect. When this card is removed from play, Special Summon it during your End Phase.

 

 

 

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I'll provide costructive criticism for once...

 

If you want to do this, then you need to take the ATK of this guy to around 1000 or something. Then make his effect depend on the number of turns that he was on the field or something. (like, tagging on at the end: "You cannot activate this effect until your second Standby Phase after this card was Summoned.") There are other balancing things you can do, but that was the first (and I think the best) idea that came to mind.

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I'm surprised it's not an insect type

 

2800 atk is a little low for a lv10 monster

 

make its atk go to the 3300 mark and it'll be fine

 

9/10

 

o yea sorry xD

forgot making it to a insect type so i'l be changing that

and for the atk, wel most real earthbounds dont have more than 3000 exept for Wiraqocha Rasca but onnly becose of its effect

so i'l think that i gona stick with the 2800 ist powerful to

but that my point of view

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I'll provide costructive criticism for once...

 

If you want to do this' date=' then you need to take the ATK of this guy to around 1000 or something. Then make his effect depend on the number of turns that he was on the field or something. (like, tagging on at the end: ) There are other balancing things you can do, but that was the first (and I think the best) idea that came to mind.

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wel to say this it would make no sense to to add "You cannot activate this effect until your second Standby Phase after this card was Summoned." non earthbound has that kind of effect

if you think that is op'd then i dont think that you know what an earthbound is. as for the ATK, same reason

i know i sayd it a bit rude so sorry about that


well then maybe lower the card level down to 9 instead?

 

earthbound's Level are 10 thats standard

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