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Red-Winged Hyper Bird


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... But fortunatly for me it does relate to it.

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"Bleu-Winged Crown" + "Sonic Bird"

This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters. If your opponent controls a monster with the same Atribute as a monster you control you can decrease that monster's ATK by 1000 until the end of your turn. If this face-up ATK monster is destroyed by battle you can Special Summon 1 "Sonic Bird".[/align]

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Grammar and spelling fixes:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters*. If your opponent controls a monster with the same Attribute as a monster you control, you can decrease that monster's ATK by 1000 until the end of your turn. If this face-up ATK monster** is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Sonic Bird".

 

*: You've got a more specific effect than Master of Dragon Soldier. It sounds awkward, but it's fine. Instead, you could say "the proper Fusion Material Monsters". Using the word 'above' is the only awkward word in that.

 

**: I feel that this should be written as "face-up Attack Position monster", solely because that's how most cards have it.

 

It's a very nice card, but the ATK decrease effect is way too OP'd. See Elemental Mistress Doriado

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Woot this got bumped over my thread so now I have to rate it, let's see....

 

 

the OCG looks fine the way it is

 

the picture is epic though

 

1000 decrease is a bit too much' date=' make it just 700 instead

 

9.2/10

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Upload the card on TinyPic instead since, with the Card Maker, it cuts off a part of the card at the bottom.

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