Lady_Killer Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Now im Finally Getting the hang of things. Plz Rate my cards and tell me how i can improve them. Also plz fix any OCG errors on my cards. Here are the monsters.When this card would be destoyed you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your hand or deck, with an ATK of 1600 or Less.When this card would be destoyed, Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster with and ATK of 1600 or less.When this card would be destoyed you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your hand or deck, with an ATK of 1600 or Less.When this card would be destoyed, Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your hand or deck with and ATK of 1600 or less.Flip: Special Summon one "Pheonix" monster From your Deck.When this card would be destoyed you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your hand or deck, with an ATK of 1600 or Less.When this card would be destoyed, Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster with and ATK of 1600 or less.A Phoenix, who has risin from the Flame a thousand time. He is perfect and is the king of birds. And Now for Some Fusion monsters. [align=center]"1 Jade Phoenix + 1 'Phoenix' monster"You may special summon this card by returning the above cards to the Deck. Any Card that battles this monster is returned to the hand at the end of the damage [/align][align=center]"Photon the Golden Phoenix + 1 'Phoenix' monster"When this card is summoned, Destoy all Spell and Trap cards on your Opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroy by battle, you may remove from play one "Phoenix", to Special Summon this card on your side of the Field.[/align][align=center]1 Sun Phoenix + 1 'Phoenix' monster.When this card is destoyed, Destoy all non-LIGHT monters on the field[/align][align=center]"1 Moonlight Phoenix +1 'Phoenix' monster"This card can be Special Summoned by sending the above cards back to the deck. When this card is Summoned, For every "Phoenix' monster in the Graveyard, Inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points x500[/align][align=center]"1 Amethyst Phoenix + 1 'Phoenix' monster"When this monster attacks with ATK higher than the DEF of a Defence Positon monster, inflict the Difference as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/align][align=center]"5 Different 'Phoenix' monsters"This card can only be summoned by the effect of Phoenix Fusion. This monsters original ATK and Def is equal to the combined Stats of the Fusion Material Monsters.[/align][align=center]"1 Sapphire Phoenix + 1 'Phoenix' monster"This card can be Special Summoned by returning the above cards to the deck. When this card is Summoned, Destoy 1 card on your opponents side of the field. [/align] Now For my Ritual Monster. This card can Only be Ritual Summoned With the Ritual Spell Card "Chaos Fire Ritual." This card Is not Affected By Effect Monster's Effects.As long as there is another "Phoenix" monster on the field, this card cannot be Destoyed by Battle. Next are my Spell Cards. Tribute 1 "Phoenix" monster on your side of the field. Destoy 1 monster on your opponents side of the field.Activate only when a "Phoenix" monster is selected as an attack target. Negate the attack and Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your hand.Once per turn, you may Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your Hand or Deck. Tribute 5 Monsters with "Phoenix" in the name, Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Phoenix" to your side of the field. This card cannot be negated.As long as this card is face-up on the field, you may Normal Summon 1 extra Phoenix monster per turn.Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed by a Fusion Monster Card from your hand or Field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon the Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck.As long as this card is Face-up on the field, all "Phoenix" that are Destroyed by battle are returned to the Deck. When this card is played, destroy All Spell and Trap cards on your side of the field. Increase the ATK and Def of all Bird Monsters by 500. Negate the activation on all Trap and Spell Cards on your opponent's side of the field. Send From your Deck or Hand to the Graveyard, Fusion Material Monsters that that are listed on a Fusion Monster Card and Special Summmon the Fusion Monster on your side of the field.This card is used to Ritual Summon "Chaos Flame Phoenix". You Must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose Total Levels Equal 8 or more. And now Finally for my Trap Cards. As long as this card is face-up on the field, Any monster that Battles a "Phoenix" Monster is destoyed at the end of the Battle Phase.Any monster that Destoys a "Phoenix" monster is Destoyed at the end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Can some body Plz rate these cards i put a lot of work into these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABB Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 8/10 by effects alone.5/10 overall. OCG is pretty horrible. Oh and bird isn't a real type. Don't make up types. It's frown upon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieatnoobs Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 No Dont Listen To That Prsn Im New But Making Your Own Types Is Cool And Your Deck Is Awesome Im Gonna Post Mine In A Bit And See How It Goes But I Love Urs Its Awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 8/10 with just the effect, I agree. But it should be "Winged Beast", and the OCG can be better. Your naming sense is better than me, and the fact you're a newby, makes up for those facts. Overall 8/10. No Dont Listen To That Prsn Im New But Making Your Own Types Is Cool And Your Deck Is Awesome Im Gonna Post Mine In A Bit And See How It Goes But I Love Urs Its Awesome Forcing someone to "not listen" is against rules. Well, you're a newby too, but anyways, try not doing that from now on. About the "new type", it's not something everyone likes, but YCM exists to create creativity. So I also think it's good. However, I also believe that since this is "Realistic Cards", I don't think this is the best thing I've seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Ah ok ill go through and change the Type to make people happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 BTW there are more phoenix cards on the way. But can someone help me with the OCG im still not that good at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 This is perfect, where did you get thes pictures. Although some slight grammer faults. Flaming Impact says destoy and not destroy. And Phoenix Inferno says destoyed instead of destroyed. That was all, really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Thank you for the compliment. Ill fix them right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gredious AKA. Solomon409 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 i lo0ve this set except the card “Chaos Flame Pheonix”‘s pic which to me looks like a chiken。。。。 might wanna get a better pic for that like a bird with purple flames？ 。。um not critizing byut u just might wanna do that k？ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Huh? What bird with purple flames. I never posted any Phoenix With purple flames. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gredious AKA. Solomon409 Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 Huh? What bird with purple flames. I never posted any Phoenix With purple flames. sry i ment the chaos one, chaos makes me think of purple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battery Boy Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 OMG! So many fusions it is like the "Elemental Heros." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtistX Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 I HATE IT, and I don't just say that 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 You may hate it, but you rate on the OCG, Pic and Effect originality. Not your likes.Huh? What bird with purple flames. I never posted any Phoenix With purple flames. sry i ment the chaos one' date=' chaos makes me think of purple[/quote'] srry, I couldn't find a Good Purple Phoenix, Especially a Purple flame Phoenix. Otherwise it would have been put into some of the other cards i made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon17master Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 WHERE THE HECK DID YOU GET THOSE CARDS? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtistX Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 Yes, ur OCG is terrible and i can see the artist tags on it and i've seen dozens of people using those images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Whats your point. THis is an old set, And i haven't updated them. I was hopeing this thread would die. As for the pics i found them on google and i dont have Photoshop so a cannot remove the logos and im not going to pay some one to fix it for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Machoke Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Wow I love those cards...I'm not very good at them myself...I've JUST got the hang of getting good pics! 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtistX Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 I guess i'm not a big fan of this.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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