Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Raging Ogre! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 I like your idea for a Trap-Monster. My only question is that it says it has an ability. . . What is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 That it can't be destroyed by any effect that destroys monsters. Which means that you have to destroy it like a trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 nice card bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 ...The Hulk? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 great card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Thanks guys! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 my only question is what is that a pic of????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 I have no idea. I got it from Deviantart when I searched "ogre" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 lol see if u can find a more detailed pic that one looks a bit cartoony........but thats just my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Meh, I think it fits the yugioh style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Everybody is being far too kind. The pic is stretched. Haven't you heard of "cropping". It will take this card to a whole new level. I also suggest you take a look at what a real trap monsters effect sounds like. The whole monster card effect can be more like "This card is not targeted by cards that target monster cards" or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 ah, okay. Thanks for the criticism. I'll go fix the card now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Everybody is being far too kind. The pic is stretched. Haven't you heard of "cropping". It will take this card to a whole new level. I also suggest you take a look at what a real trap monsters effect sounds like. The whole monster card effect can be more like "This card is not targeted by cards that target monster cards" or something like that.Aw come on Give the guy some slack its just his first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 but the problem with cropping is that the pic is at its limits of being cut as it is so if it is cropped then part of the arms will go missing causing it to look crappy. (plus its not stretched that much) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 but the problem with cropping is that the pic is at its limits of being cut as it is so if it is cropped then part of the arms will go missing causing it to look crappy. (plus its not stretched that much) yah what he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 fix'd.actually I think it looks better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 ................i cant tell much of the difference. did it even matter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 i have to agree with Actor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menace13 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Pretty good but a little OP. Needs either less ATK, cost to activate, or some other drawback. Otherwise you get a 2000 ATK monster on your first turn. Maybe make it have 1000 DEF and make it only be able to be activated during your Main Phase 1 and only be able to be Special Summoned in Defense Position. OCG errors: I don't think they use semi-colons but I dunno. Beast-Type should be Beast-type. It should say "This card's activation and effect cannot be negated." The last sentence (in parentheses) has an unnecessary "still" in it. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazyeye777 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 I am glad other people are making trap monsters. thanks dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 trap monsters are nothing new, though they ARE rare still, 2000/1800 stats is too weak for a lv8 monster. You didn't even give it any boosting ability either so I'd lower the lv down to 5 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Ragnarok, Metal Reflect slime was a 10-star, 0 ATK, 3000 DEF Trap-Monster. I never quite got that, but that's why mine has such a high level. Its ability is that it can't be destroyed as a monster, you have to destroy it as a trap card. crazyeye, You're welcome. :D Menace, Gene-warped Werewolf is a 200-Atk monster you can play on your first turn, and it lacks the weaknesses of a trap card. Thanks for the OCG fixes though, I'll go fix it right now. (it was in part copied from Metal Reflect Slime)Fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Everybody is being far too kind. The pic is stretched. Haven't you heard of "cropping". It will take this card to a whole new level. I also suggest you take a look at what a real trap monsters effect sounds like. The whole monster card effect can be more like "This card is not targeted by cards that target monster cards" or something like that.Aw come on Give the guy some slack its just his first try. Giving people breaks is just how YCM will go down in quality. It needs people to be tough on the new card makers so that they learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Welche, you're 100% right, and I thank you for helping me make my card better. This is not my first card, it's just my first trap-monster. Once again, thanks for being honest, I appreciate it. I did edit the card. Do you like it better now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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