YugiMasterMind Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 plz dont say im stupid im not used to making these high and good cards! and i am looking for an editor who will help me edit before publish plz dont yell or be mean and say "OHH THATS AN EPIC FAIL lol" plz dont do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 OK I like this. Just afew things you should fix: OCG: Just a couple of grammar mistakes, you should read them over and fix them... Attack Defence: You kept it pretty fair for some cards, just some are overpowered such as: Flame Dragon State 2... I think it is just that one. Pictures: Quality of pictures: 7/10 For Phantom dragon 2 state, the picture is from a ORIGIONAL Yu-gi-oh card.. You should change the picture. Overall: 7.5/10 Nice job beginner :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKCHAOS445 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 RATEED IN THIS ORDER CARD 1 9/10CARD 2 5/10CARD 3 8/10CARD 4 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 plz dont say im stupid im not used to making these high and Horrible []Fixed[/u] cards! and i am looking for an editor who will help me edit before publish You make me lol plz dont yell or be mean and say "OHH THATS AN EPIC FAIL lol" plz dont do thatBad OCG Bad pics2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OK_GO_Charizard Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 You don't say "this card has to be special Summoned" you say "This card can't be Normal Summoned". It's not an Epic fail, it's not an Epic win either. 5.5/10 to be generous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Like Chaos Star said the cards need some work. Right now 4/10. However with all the errors completely fixed 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bran2939 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 flame dragon state 1 has a pic which is used a bit i even used it on my old ycm account. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aibara Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 A very good job for a beginner!!!!(I'm a beginner, too, so I can't judge extremely well, but I'll try.) The stats(ATK-DEF) are very good, but the quality of the images is not that well. So, I'll give you 7.5-8/10.(I used Phantom Dragon-State 1 image, too. It's a great image, isn't it?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 LOL. Flame Dragon State 1 is the same picture as my fire dragon just lo-res. Flame Dragon State 1 needs a Ritual Spell. OCG. Lo-Res pics. 6-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.