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toon should be Toon.

That effect is impossible. With the percentages. Change it to:

Flip a coin 4 times. If 3 or more of the results are heads, increase the ATK of the equipped Monster by 500. If not, destroy the equipped Monster.

You spelled destroyed wrong.

gains 500 and 200 what?

instead of saying gains, say "increase the ATK and DEF of this card by *number* .

graveyard should be Graveyard.

You forgot a period.

Should say, "This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of cards in the Graveyard x500."

it's OP'ed.

1.02/10

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toon should be Toon.

That effect is impossible. With the percentages. Change it to:

Flip a coin 4 times. If 3 or more of the results are heads' date=' increase the ATK of the equipped Monster by 500. If not, destroy the equipped Monster.

You spelled destroyed wrong.

gains 500 and 200 what?

instead of saying gains, say "increase the ATK and DEF of this card by *number* .

graveyard should be Graveyard.

You forgot a period.

Should say, "This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of cards in the Graveyard x500."

it's OP'ed.

1.02/10

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I completely agree with this.

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toon should be Toon.

That effect is impossible. With the percentages. Change it to:

Flip a coin 4 times. If 3 or more of the results are heads' date=' increase the ATK of the equipped Monster by 500. If not, destroy the equipped Monster.

You spelled destroyed wrong.

gains 500 and 200 what?

instead of saying gains, say "increase the ATK and DEF of this card by *number* .

graveyard should be Graveyard.

You forgot a period.

Should say, "This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of cards in the Graveyard x500."

it's OP'ed.

1.02/10

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I agree with this but

 

6/10

 

I was a lot nicer than him

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