Enma Kozato Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Here is my set[spoiler="Rise of the Dark Dragon Overlord" Set][spoiler=Monster][spoiler=Darkness Dragon (Over)Lords][spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 face-up Level 6 or higher DARK Dragon-Type monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the amount of face-up Dragon-type monsters your opponent controls x500. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 2, you can Tribute 1 Dragon-Type monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When this card is destroyed, you lose Life Points equal to the amount of cards in your hand x600. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you lose Life Points equal to the amount of non-Dragon-Type monsters your opponent controls x500.[spoiler=lore]This card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 1 DARK monster from your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not discard 1 card, reduce this cards ATK and DEF by 250. If this monster is destroyed by battle, add 1 Spell Card to your hand from your deck.[spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Unsealing of the Darkness Dragon Lord". You cannot attack a monster on your opponents side of the field the turn this card is summoned. When this card is Special Summoned, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to halve the ATK and DEF of all face-up Warrior and Spellcaster-type monsters until your opponents next Battle Phase. When this card is Special Summoned, your opponent must skip his/her next Battle Phase. [spoiler=Common monsters] [spoiler=Fusions] [spoiler=lore]"Darkness Dragon Overlord, Necronias, Bringer of Destruction" + "Darkness Dragon Lord, Hiamos, One Among Humans"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This monster is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field. You can half the ATK of this monster to attack your opponent directly. You can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon "Darkness Dragon Overlord, Necronias, Bringer of Destruction" and Darkness Dragon Lord, Hiamos, One Among Humans" face-up on your side of the field from the Graveyard. [spoiler=Rituals][spoiler=lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Freedom of the Darkness Archdragons". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal to 10. This card is unaffected by the effect of Spell Cards. Once per turn, you can discard 2 Dragon-type monsters from your hand to activate one of the following effects: Destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Add 2 Spell or Trap Cards from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Freedom of the Darkness Archdragons". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal to 9. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all monsters with "Darkness Archdragon" in their name are not effected by the effects of Spell Cards. If an Equip Spell is equipped to this card, destroy this card.[spoiler=lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Freedom of the Darkness Archdragons". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal to 10. During your next Draw Phase, draw 1 card for each LIGHT monster on your side of the field. During your opponents next Main Phase, your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand for each DARK monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the activation of your opponent's Spell or Trap card and return it to it's original position. [spoiler=Spell](Credit for Image goes to Nexev)[spoiler=Trap] I have one thing to say:you may think a few things about Darkness Dragon Overlord, Necronia, Bringer of Destruction such as: His Drawbacks are too pricey, or he is too hard to summon. but all of those will be fixed by the other cards in the set.so, for now, please ignore that they are what I listed above until I either finish the set or reach the point in which I have made the cardds that do what I said earlier "be weakend/nullified etc."please comment on these Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 all the monster card pics are overused still, the OCG for all of them look fine Sealing Destruction's pic looks a little like Gorgon's Eye the effects are well thought out, so I'll give this set 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Really, if this set lets you easily summon 3 lvl 6 or higher dragons it might be OP. I'm also not into the 50 letter long names. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Really' date=' if this set lets you easily summon 3 lvl 6 or higher dragons it might be OP. I'm also not into the 50 letter long names. 8/10[/quote']Yeahhh not how it worksI'm going to start adding weaker monsters soon but there will be like 4-7 dragon lordsI haven't decided@ragnarok really?! Even after going in 30 pages of deviantart alot of people still use these picswell I would say the pic I tried the least hard to find was Urinian, since I just used another card I made for a contestwhich inspired methank you for looking at my set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Really' date=' if this set lets you easily summon 3 lvl 6 or higher dragons it might be OP. I'm also not into the 50 letter long names. 8/10[/quote']Yeahhh not how it worksI'm going to start adding weaker monsters soon but there will be like 4-7 dragon lordsI haven't decided@ragnarok really?! Even after going in 30 pages of deviantart alot of people still use these picswell I would say the pic I tried the least hard to find was Urinian, since I just used another card I made for a contestwhich inspired methank you for looking at my set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Awesome cards, OCG is good, the pics are awesome. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Awesome cards, OCG is good, the pics are awesome. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Awesome cards, OCG is good, the pics are awesome. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 added new trapp this morning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Great cards with Great effects, Waiting for more. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 thank youI'm going to add a few cards in a little bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 the trap effect I'm unsure if it's OPed you both lose plenty of LP, but your opponent remains open to attack, so maybe add in you have to skip your battle phase 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 Will edit that soon.Added two cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 The new cards have good OCG and pic's except its set not Set in correct OCG, The effects are good so 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 actually"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set"I crossrefrenced it with a recent card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 Domain of the Overlord's effect is fine, but it needs to have a drawback I'll give that one 8.9/10 for good pic and OCG though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 mayeb I should make it "Neither player can Set cards." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 that certainly could work you going to modify it to that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 added two more cards and revised previous ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 A few OCG errors, and you uploaded the wrong card cause Mage of the overlord has no pic... so for now 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 oh oops...fixing nowmind telling me where i mesed up on OCG so i can fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Ok: Graveyard is capitalized.Life Points is capitalized.Tribute is capitalized. Also you should remove nexev's credit because he found the image he did not make it. so 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 damn you capitalization...one dayok will fix my errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Since you Fixed capitalization errors i will raise my rate to 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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