Alexis Rhodes Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 [align=center] I was Bored , Actuallty very bored so i made this Credit - ::тǿρħєя:: For the Border [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Sorry, but too many OCG errors and too simple effect (border is cool though)7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Killer Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 WoW, So few words and so meny Punctuaton, Spelling, and OCG errors. Good card though, At least i can understand the effect. Good pic and i love the boarder, how u do it. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Fix - You can Tribute 1 monster you control to select 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it. Picture is, meh-ish good. Simple effect, quite dull. 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 I know the OCG is bad i will change it to what GR wrote If anyone would like to be my ICG tutor and tell me i would be happy ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Fix - You can Tribute 1 monster you control to select 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it. Picture is' date=' meh-ish good. Simple effect, quite dull. 7.7/10[/quote'] Fixed. Nice picture, effect is booring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 That is terribad OCG, but daco already pointed out the fix.Nice pic and Border color.Way too simple effect, though.6.5/10PS: I can be your "OCG corrector" if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 I can. I'm good at OCG. PM me OCG fixes for your cards. Gradually you should learn my OCG and use it. It's usually flawless. @Fish - loltypo. I won't type that fast again x[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Talk about OPd? The OCG epicly fails. I don't completely like the border either its to seeable. Make it more translucent. OCG... Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to destroy one monster on the field that is not a WATER monster. Maybe add a 300 LP cost. 6.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Talk about OPd? The OCG epicly fails. I don't completely like the border either its to seeable. Make it more translucent. OCG... Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to destroy one monster on the field that is not a WATER monster. Maybe add a 300 LP cost. 6.6/10I've already fixed the card =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Ok Edited Feel free to rate again everyone :) And GR i will :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 You did? Did it match what I wrote or did you use the fail new OCG? Lolwutigottareadtheposts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 @ώяάτћThe fix of Ghost Ryder was right, you did not need to fix it again and wrong. No offense .-. @Ghost Ryderlrn2type. Kidding >.> Mistakes happen sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 @ώяάτћThe fix of Ghost Ryder was right' date=' you did not need to fix it again [s']and wrong[/s]. No offense .-. @Ghost Ryderlrn2type. Kidding >.> Mistakes happen sometimes.It used to happen to me before. First mistype I've had in ages whilst fixing cards...gah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Dont argue guys its only a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Actually, this is the corrected OCG:You can Tribute 1 monster you control to select destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Sorry BTW. Also, I'm not liking the border with the card for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Actually' date=' this is the corrected OCG:You can Tribute 1 monster you control to [s']select[/s] destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it. Would you help me with OCG aswell ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 In my opinion it would be You can Tribute 1 monster you control to select and destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Actually' date=' this is the corrected OCG:You can Tribute 1 monster you control to [s']select[/s] destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it.If I'm experienced. It would be "select" before that because you would choose. I believe I'm experienced. I could be wrong. But usually I'm not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Actually' date=' this is the corrected OCG:You can Tribute 1 monster you control to [s']select[/s] destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it. Would you help me with OCG aswell ?Yes, why not. Actually' date=' this is the corrected OCG:You can Tribute 1 monster you control to [s']select[/s] destroy 1 non-WATER monster on the field and destroy it.If I'm experienced. It would be "select" before that because you would choose. I believe I'm experienced. I could be wrong. But usually I'm not."Select and destroy" is no more used on new OCG.It's also correct use it, but is old. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 very simple effect, but I guess it's suited for a low level monster, though I still feel it's OPed the picture looks quite neat too 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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