New Yankeefan Single - Archaic Bereaver

[Yankee]

Welcome,

This is yet another card from me. Hopefully, it will be just as good as I normally am (no ego, srsly!)

 

I hope you all enjoy it.

 

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[spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from the Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 during each of your Standby Phases. When this card attacks or is attacked by a monster with more ATK than this card, decrease the ATK of this card by the difference after the Damage Step. If the ATK of this card becomes 0, it is destroyed.

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It's name has meaning.

Bereaver means to take things, usually by force. Archaic means to be absolete, or to be out of date, like how this is destroyed when it finally becomes 0.

 

Please remember to rate and comment.

 

Thank you all for looking,

Cheers,

Yankeefan ^_\\\

[Jazin Kay]

Eh, it doesn't quite do it for me, since I know exactly what the image originally is. A heavily edited anime screenshot of Armed Dragon LV10.

 

"Damage calculation" is not capitalized. "During every 1 of your Standby Phases" should be "during each of your Standby Phases".

 

"Monster with more ATK than this card" should be "monster with an ATK higher than the ATK of this card", but that's just my preference; actual OCG is unknown at this time.

 

I like it, but I've seen you make better. You been away or something?

[Yankee]

Eh' date=' it doesn't quite do it for me, since I know exactly what the image originally is. A heavily edited anime screenshot of Armed Dragon LV10.

 

"Damage calculation" is not capitalized. "During every 1 of your Standby Phases" should be "during each of your Standby Phases".

 

"Monster with more ATK than this card" should be "monster with an ATK higher than the ATK of this card", but that's just my preference; actual OCG is unknown at this time.

 

I like it, but I've seen you make better. You been away or something?

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Ya, away for a long time o.0

Nobody noticed..?

*cries*

 

Fixed and edited a little.

[poopybuttoxes]

Im really diggin this card. Very interesting and creative effect. 10/10

[Yankee]

Im really diggin this card. Very interesting and creative effect. 10/10

 

Thank you ^_\\\

[.Requiem]

This card kinda reminds me of a card I made awhile ago with a similar effect with the ATK and my card revives itself. :/

 

I have seen better from you, but I am trying to figure on how to use it. Maybe a stall?

[έκλειψη]

I can't see the card..,

D:

 

Well, I like the effect.

 

I thought the title stated Archaic Beaver, and I didn't want to look because of a... Phobia

ANYWAYS!

From the effect, a 8.9/10

[gustavosuarez]

nice card. the pic is a custom of a armed dragon lv10 pic i though, but its good for me. the effect is interesting, not impressive, but good. i know that you are out for a long time, but your OCG could be good again if you take your time:) 9.2/10

[ragnarok1945]

that's an overused pic

 

I guess it's balanced for its atk gains and losses, shame that's pretty much all it does though

 

9/10

[Yankee]

I can't see the card..' date='

D:

 

Well, I like the effect.

 

I thought the title stated Archaic Beaver, and I didn't want to look because of a... Phobia

ANYWAYS!

From the effect, a 8.9/10

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Thanks for the support everybody ^_\\\

 

And about the beaver...

All I can say is that at least we got it on youtube ;)

[MarbleZone]

I'll offer an OCG correction suggestion, take it with a grain of salt nonetheless, as I've been away for a long time myself:

 

"This card cannot be Special Summoned except from the Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card gains 1000 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card battles an opponent's monster with higher ATK, this card loses ATK equal to the difference at the end of the Damage Step. When this card's ATK becomes 0, destroy it."

 

Perfectly balanced in my eyes, can't think of any combo that would make this broken. Nice job ;)

[Yankee]

Thanks, glad you like it ^_\\\

[~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~]

Love the card The meaning is Beautiful lol... Nice ocg 11/10 LOL

[Lord Smeagle]

I love this card. It's fun and effective, and a nice alternative to the usual 2400-2500 beatsticks you normally get in a six-star.

[Yankee]

Thank you both very much ^_\\\

[twinsandvikes]

good card, 9/10

[Yankee]

Thank you ^_\\\

What makes it a good card? ;) (You need to post more than that, sir)

[Cloister]

OCG has been pointed out already

Likz it!

I am surprised I haven't seen this pic being used as an "Armed Dragon" monster that relates to them.

 

Why would you attack a monster with more ATK when you know this is going to lose ATK? (just pointing it out) anyway, balanced since it can be decreased if attacked first turn (or it will just be destoyed by battle).

[Yankee]

Thanks ^_\\\

And thats so if you like..Brain Control it or something, idk..

But it amount the same to "When it battles"

So ya

Glad ya like it ^_\\\

[Kitty]

Card is good. Nothing else to say

 

8.5/10

[Yankee]

Thank you ^_\\\

[KindredTether]

Looks like Armed Dragon LV10.

[Yankee]

Well, ya..Thats because thats what the pic is of..A silver LV 10 >_>

[Zeaux]

I love this card. It's fun and effective' date=' and a nice alternative to the usual 2400-2500 beatsticks you normally get in a six-star.

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Yeah, you don't. But you get a unbeatable monster that gains 1000 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. This card >>> Level 6 Beat stick monsters.

 

Good card, and good away to have a beast stick monster in only few turns. Maybe a little OP.

 

Rate~

 

8.4/10

[Leturn Master]

I love this card. It's fun and effective' date=' and a nice alternative to the usual 2400-2500 beatsticks you normally get in a six-star.

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Yeah, you don't. But you get a unbeatable monster that gains 1000 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. This card >>> Level 6 Beat stick monsters.

 

Good card, and good away to have a beast stick monster in only few turns. Maybe a little OP.

 

Rate~

 

8.4/10

 

That's ONLY if your card can survive the 2 turns till it becomes a 3000 Attacker... which is considerably doubtful. The second this guy gets on the field (from the Graveyard, might I add... how many decent cards will Summon this guy from your Graveyard?), he'll be the first target your opponent attacks. And any monster with 1000+ ATK (wait, that's most monsters...) will be able to take this thing out.

 

Waaaay not useful. I'd get rid of that Graveyard-Summoning requirement... it's too hefty. And even then...