Niflheim, Envoy of the Ice Barrier

[Raziel255]

 

 

 

1 Tuner + ''Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier'' + 1 or more non Tuner monsters

You can return any number of cards from your side of the field to the hand to remove from play the same number of cards your opponet controls.

 

 

...so what do you say.....?

[Cloister]

Ehh.. well, hard to summon since you need 3 cards (brioniac is Level 6 so you need 1 Tuner that is 1 or 2,and another monster that is Level 1 or 2)

And effect is too simple sorry, though good OCG for new 6/10 (not big fan of Ice Barriers)

[Max Darkness]

The effect is not really coherent with the rest of the Ice Barriers, since they rely on returning cards your opponent controls, not removing them from play.

The picture is overused, but your OCG is relatively good for a 1-star.

 

5/10

[Raziel255]

....thank you, this is my first card i made...

[ragnarok1945]

not bad for a new member

 

the pic and OCG both look reasonably well

 

just the effect is a little dull, give it another one

 

7.8/10

[Mehmani]

Very good for a new member.

 

You can't really blame him for the picture being overused, he's only been here for a small period. Decent OCG, well thought-up name and generally a slightly realistic feel to it, I'd give this an 8.8/10.

 

If you WEREN'T a new member, I'd give you a 6.9/10, but being a newbie you deserve the 8.8/10 I've given you.

[Raziel255]

....thank you all , the name is not madeupp , Niflheim-world of the primordial element of ice....