Smokins bad, M'kay.

[SuperSusanoo]

[spoiler=Effect]This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters than you. This card gains 300 ATK for each removed from play DARK monster. Once per turn, you can place 1 Smog Counter on a face-up monster. The card's controller must pay 500 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. If not, the card is destroyed. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon up to 3 "Smog Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/ Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) The Tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon.

 

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Pic's from Jazin Kay

[Cloister]

This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters than you. This card gains 300 ATK for each removed from play DARK monster. Once per turn, you can place 1 Smog Counter on a face-up monster. The card's controller must pay 500 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. If not, the card is destroyed. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon up to 3 "Smog Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/ Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) The Tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon.

 

Fixed OCG

good card like the effect really much 8/10 for now fix OCG, I'll raise to 9.1/10

[SuperSusanoo]

Ok edited

[Cloister]

I'll raise to what I said before 9.1/10

forgot to say you need a dot at after the token description like this:

 

"(...DEF 100). The Tokens cannot attack"

[SuperSusanoo]

oops ok

[ragnarok1945]

OCG errors have been pointed out already

 

a shame it only gains 300 atk per DARK monster removed though, will take at least 8 to give it the right atk power

 

9/10

[SuperSusanoo]

anymore comments?

[Naturia Master]

maybe you should start it off on something like 1200 atk so it doesn't take so long to get it to a decent attack. 9/10