Demon From The Void Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 Tell me what you think.All pictures from Genzoman on DeviantArt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 last 2 fusion monsters have too short effects, they need more effects, right now they're too boring also cards 1 and 3 have slightly overused pics 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 last 2 fusion monsters have too short effects' date=' they need more effects, right now they're too boring also cards 1 and 3 have slightly overused pics 7/10[/quote'] What effects would you suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Blakeasirda Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 My opinion of the cards. Evil Hero Aerial BlazeThere are so many E hero burstinatrix and Avian Fusions I am sick of them. The picture is AMAZING for this one though. It has a well balanced effect and I do like the slight attack increase over the others.Rating:Balance 3/3Grammar 3/3Originality 0/2Picture 3/2 (You get extra credit. The picture fits everything amazingly.)overall for Evil Hero Aerial Blaze 9/10advice: Don't make him an evil hero. that way you can use different fusion monsters. Lord of storms I this one has the use of any two or more thunder types for its summon. This is a rare case in which that will work in my opinion.I still don't like it though. To easy to get out then. The rest of it is great, though the picture is a little squishedrating:Balance: 2/3Grammar: 3/3Originality: 2/2Picture: 1/2Total for Lord of Storms: 8/10Advice and final word: Although there is nothing that could have been done about the picture I had to lower the score. Sorry. My advice is to find a specific "Warrior" type monster and make that a set being in the fusion. It will put in for the humaniod aspect of the storm lord and the thunder monsters will put in for his powers. Warrior Fairythis one is kind of obvious you didn't put any work into. It is a poor card in my personal opinion. The picture is AMAZING but the effect is blah and the Fusion Material is horrible. In the earlier post I said that using generic fusion materials works in very few cards. This is not one of those cards. Plus I do believe the grammar is meant to say "This cards type is also considered 'Fairy'" Correct me if I am wrong. Rating.Balance: 1/3Grammar: 2/3Originality: 0/2Picture: 2/2total for Warrior Fairy: 5/10Advice: Do a little research before making a card. Either Find or Make the fusion material monsters that would fit for this kind of a card. I would have used Archlord Zerato and Maurading Captain. To use those however I would suggest you raised the attack and defence a bit. You also NEED a better effect. Again do some research and look up your fusion materials effects. Find some way to incorperate them. If that doesn't work, you need to make an effect worthy of the picture. Final cardSpirit of Halloween This Card shares a similar problem to the one above. It however does not need larger effect for it has a second already.Balance: 2/3Grammar: 3/3Originality: 2/2Picture: 1.5/2Total for Spirit of Halloween: 8.5/10Advice: Again find two fusion material monsters that fit it. The only ones that come to mind for this are Spirit Reaper and Pumpking the King of ghosts. Final word for all cards: Very well done on most. Do a little research for your cards in the future and it will be bright!Final score for all cards: 30.5/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 My opinion of the cards. Evil Hero Aerial BlazeThere are so many E hero burstinatrix and Avian Fusions I am sick of them. The picture is AMAZING for this one though. It has a well balanced effect and I do like the slight attack increase over the others.Rating:Balance 3/3Grammar 3/3Originality 0/2Picture 3/2 (You get extra credit. The picture fits everything amazingly.)overall for Evil Hero Aerial Blaze 9/10advice: Don't make him an evil hero. that way you can use different fusion monsters. Lord of storms I this one has the use of any two or more thunder types for its summon. This is a rare case in which that will work in my opinion.I still don't like it though. To easy to get out then. The rest of it is great' date=' though the picture is a little squishedrating:Balance: 2/3Grammar: 3/3Originality: 2/2Picture: 1/2Total for Lord of Storms: 8/10Advice and final word: Although there is nothing that could have been done about the picture I had to lower the score. Sorry. My advice is to find a specific "Warrior" type monster and make that a set being in the fusion. It will put in for the humaniod aspect of the storm lord and the thunder monsters will put in for his powers. Warrior Fairythis one is kind of obvious you didn't put any work into. It is a poor card in my personal opinion. The picture is AMAZING but the effect is blah and the Fusion Material is horrible. In the earlier post I said that using generic fusion materials works in very few cards. This is not one of those cards. Plus I do believe the grammar is meant to say "This cards type is also considered 'Fairy'" Correct me if I am wrong. Rating.Balance: 1/3Grammar: 2/3Originality: 0/2Picture: 2/2total for Warrior Fairy: 5/10Advice: Do a little research before making a card. Either Find or Make the fusion material monsters that would fit for this kind of a card. I would have used Archlord Zerato and Maurading Captain. To use those however I would suggest you raised the attack and defence a bit. You also NEED a better effect. Again do some research and look up your fusion materials effects. Find some way to incorperate them. If that doesn't work, you need to make an effect worthy of the picture. Final cardSpirit of Halloween This Card shares a similar problem to the one above. It however does not need larger effect for it has a second already.Balance: 2/3Grammar: 3/3Originality: 2/2Picture: 1.5/2Total for Spirit of Halloween: 8.5/10Advice: Again find two fusion material monsters that fit it. The only ones that come to mind for this are Spirit Reaper and Pumpking the King of ghosts. Final word for all cards: Very well done on most. Do a little research for your cards in the future and it will be bright!Final score for all cards: 30.5/40[/quote'] Thanks :D. 1 rep for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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