Crashzx Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 effect:When this card is Summoned you can select one card on your opponent's side of the field and gain control of it.If its a monster and is used in a Tribute that monster is returned to your opponents side of the field,rather than discarding it to the Graveyard.If it is a Spell/Trap then you can discard it to draw a card but the card of your opponent is returned to their hand. This is just the beginning of my massive collection of Epic cards im hoping to make at least 25 of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 ...Wanna post the lore for those who can't read it? ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crashzx Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 ok but i can read it fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Well others can't. There's a difference. When this card is Summoned' date=' you can select 1 card on your opponent's side of the field and gain control of it. If it is a monster and is used as a Tribute, that monster is returned to your opponents side of the field, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. If it is a Spell or Trap Card, you can send it to the Graveyard to draw 1 card. The Spell or Trap Card sent to the Graveyard is returned to your opponent's hand.[/quote'] I couldn't fix all of it. Anyway, I'm not sure what I think about it's control effects. I mean, if you take control of a monster, depending on what you get, who's gonna Tribute it? Plus, for the Spell/Trap thing, can you do it while they're face-down or face-up? It seems...simple really. Confusing. I guess it's balanced though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crashzx Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 heres second card thanks for ratingIm not going to make amazing cards at first but when i make more the'll get better and better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 The second one has OCG errors too: "When this card declares an attack..." is what it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 2100/1800 is a bit...high for a Level 4 monster. But considering it's effect, I'd raise it's level and stats. /: Each time this monster attacks' date=' pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. If this card was Special Summoned, it's effect is negated.[/quote'] I'm not sure if this was the correct OCG or not. But it seemed shorter and down to the point. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Little Tip,Don't be the noob who posts his whole set in posts. There is A edit botton located on your thread, where you can update it, and I say this because me, and i'm sure a few more people on this forums don't want to go threw the effort to find your cards threw pages of posts, and also to the cards. Like the post before me, ( The one fixing your OCG ), I agree with the effects I don't really like the picture, but again i'm more into sci-fi stuff. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 the pic is slightly overused not gain control of it, TAKE control of it plus taking control of it permanently is OPed (this was exactly why Change of Heart was banned) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 lots of OCG errors O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiMasterMind Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 well played! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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