kidwarrior77 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 some capitalization errors it's not too hard to summon at all and the 650 atk gain is boring on its own, it needs another effect, as well as a drawback to it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidwarrior77 Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 i coulsnt really thought of a effect. i didnt want it to mak it to be overpowered..n a drawbac ill think of sumthink Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruelnoob200 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Try to make the text a little more correct like add some capitals according to what it usually is. For instance:"This -C-ard cannot be -N-ormal -S-ummoned or -S-et." The -@- is the letter that shoud be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ianbelo Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 The pictures are pretty cool, but there needs to be some touch ups with the effect of Master Blademan, as well as some work on your grammar. You should change "this card than gains 650 atk" to "this card gains 650 ATK". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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