thecross Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I'm finally a pretty experienced card creater, but all I ask for is CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Remember nobody's perfect, so be nice and plz tell me wat i can fix. [spoiler=Demons(monsters)] [spoiler=Demon Toon Samurai]This monster can not be normal summoned. This monster can only be special summoned by "Toon World" or "Demon World". You can do one of these following effects once per turn:1: if "Demon World" is on the field you can attack directly.2: if "Toon World" is on the field double this monster's attack until your end phase. [spoiler=Hellborn Demon Dragon][Dark Undead Dragon/High X King Yoyo-Final Demon Form]This monster can not be normal summoned. This monster can not be special summoned or set, except by the fusion material monster. For every "Demon" in the graveyard this monster gains 500 attack and defense. When this card goes to the graveyard, inflict the number of attack points to your opponent's life points. [spoiler=Evil Yoyo Legend-Final Demon Form]This card can not be normal summoned.This card can not be special summoned or set, except by removing a "High X King Yoyo" from play and sacrificing "High X King Yoyo-Demon Form". While this monster is on the field, give all DARK monsters 500 attack and 300 defense. [spoiler=Legion-The Warlock]This card can not be normal summoned. This card can not be special summoned, except by the effect of the Ritual Spell "Legion Summoning". If this card is still on the field, once per turn you can special summon a monster from the graveyard with "Demon" in it's name. For every "Demon" monster in your graveyard, this card gains 300 attack and 500 defense. [spoiler=Spells and Traps] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Ω Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Demon isn't a real type, but mostly nice pics. Some of the names are a bit simple though. I think there are a few OCG errors, but i'm not sure. 3.6/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I put demon a sub type i was told by a moderator u can make fake sub types just not fake types but thx anywaysanymore comments and rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Wow, I kinda like it^^ I'm just starting so I got amazed easily haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 i like these cards. a couple of the pictures are blurry, so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 thx you guys and welcom raymond5577 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 anybody else want to rate or comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skeith2010 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 I'm new to the site but not to yu-gi-oh. "Army of Demons"- It has high ATK and DEF but it's level is 8. If you're going to make a high ATK and DEF card, raise it's level, even tho it can't be normal summoned. "Demon Impaler"- It says that it is one of the best , but in all reality, it's kinda sucky. 1600ATK and 1400DEF and u call it the best? Sorry, but that's not very realistic. Almost ALL of your other Monsters have a better ATK and DEF. If u want to keep his description as "One of the best", then raise his ATK and DEF For your fusions, make a "+" sign between each Fusion Material monster so it's a bit more like a real card. I didn't read the spells and traps, but i think that their good. When i have more time, i will take a look at them and tell you what i think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 ok so your saying on Demon Impaler that i should overpower it but then it would get banned.there are a lot of cards saying they're deadly and all that but they're so weak.I've seen lvl 8-9 have a large attack power just like Army of Demons.Fusions dont have + signs synchros do.You know what, i'm actually starting to believe you havent seen one yugioh card in your entire life!P.S. RATE!in my other post i wasnt trying to be mean, but plz tell me one fusion that has a + sign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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