bennyboy757 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Hmmm.... Pretty good!! I don't like your picture and it's pretty OP'ed but the OCG is great for your first card! Two things I'd like to point out-1. You don't need to put light in between quotation marks.2. Is that a comma? It should be a period. 8/10Make more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Maybe say it like this: While "Spirits Beyond" is on the field, you can discared 2 Light Monsters from your Hand to the Graveyard, to return all monsters in your Graveyard back to your Deck. (Or you could say) While "Spirits Beyond" is on the field, you can discared 2 Light Monsters from your Hand to the Graveyard, to return all monsters in both players Graveyards back to their respective Decks. For your first card very good!!! 8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CARLCGL Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 well i like the pic... but this have a sign the SPECK second fix is great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 well i like the pic... but this have a sign the SPECK second fix is great! Thanks for the compliment! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 The pic is not hi-res 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Blurry pic. Pretty good OCG for a first card. 7-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Errix'ian Yin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Cool card but the pic is sort of blurry and has words on it listen to the other guys they know what they are sating. click on ht egg plz let it live and grow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Hmmm.... Pretty good!! I don't like your picture and it's pretty OP'ed but the OCG is great for your first card! Two things I'd like to point out-1. You don't need to put light in between quotation marks.2. Is that a comma? It should be a period. 8/10Make more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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